Reviews for "The Healer's Heart"

Mon Jan 26, 2004 8:09 am

So far a very nice story, I like it a lot Smile smiley face

I haven't read many hobbit fics (it's mostly elves out there Wink smiley face

), but this one seems to be good. And I don't think it starts slowly - it has just the right pace Smile smiley face

Update soon Very Happy smiley face

Fri Feb 27, 2004 9:12 pm

Wonderful, beautifully written. You certainly do have talent. After reading this, I was actually disappointed to see that you had no other pieces written, as I was looking for more. Anyway, I love the plot on this one, thus far. Your character, Lily, is delightful. And I much enjoy your portrayel of Frodo. Keep up the great work, and I hope to see more (especially of this particular piece) from you soon. Smile smiley face

Mon May 31, 2004 11:22 am

As the author of the only other NC-17 Frodo fics on this site (and if you think I am kidding, do a search on 'Frodo' and 'NC-17', it's sad! You and I are IT.) I thought I should read this and let you know what I thought.

I am very pleased to see someone who can write, who doesn't use vulgar terms for anatomy, and who is interested in presenting Frodo as a MALE! LOL! While I don't mind other people having their own interpretations and have seen many fine examples of it, I ACHE for good Frodo het! I mean, here was possibly the most compelling and appealing male character ever written into fiction, then portrayed by a breathtakingly beautiful young man, how on earth could he NOT inspire romantic stories?

This piece was very readable and the smut was quite enjoyable. I was rather strongly reminded of my own first fanfic (posted at OS - 'Promises') where I have a healer/apprentice midwife, older than he by a few years, teaching him 'the ropes' - would you believe while she is gathering herbs on the hillside? I guess that's a STRONGLY compelling image, eh? Hehehee... The stories are different otherwise but I got a kick out of the similarities and, as you could probably guess, I quite related to the storyline. Are you going to continue it past his quest and return? I am quite keen on encouraging you to finish this. I write Frodo het because I am very fond of it and want there to be more out there! It is hard to come by, but I can point you to a whole archive of it if (by a mix of authors, very romantic and none of it crass - I share your dislike of vulgar description). If you are interested, of course.

You write very well even if this is your first fic. Better than many who consider themselves writers, I might add. I do hope you keep this up and get in touch with me. I have enjoyed this piece a great deal and would love to enjoy more of your work.

Ariel

Tue Jun 08, 2004 9:08 pm

Fabulous story! You have an imense talent for bringing your reader into the story (and with that last chap that is a verrrry good thing indeed!). I love how you talked about all the herbs and flowers and what medicinal qualities they had. You're either very knowledgable in this area or have a fantastic imagination. A real pleasure to read, thank you!

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