Joined: 27 Dec 2003 Reviews: 93
Location: Busy Being the Queen Of Everything.. And Trying to Catch the Yoda-Copter
Sun Jan 25, 2004 10:09 am
I'm not much of a poet myself, so I don't know how much my opinion matters, but I like it Nobody ever gives the eagles much credit...
Tae
Joined: 10 Oct 2003 Reviews: 3
Location: Atlanta
Sun Jan 25, 2004 7:55 pm
I liked it. Good job.
Rous
Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Mon Nov 08, 2004 5:04 pm
Another good poem. More steady, meter-wise. I felt slightly adrift in the middle two stanzas, but still, it was a good read. There is a typo in the second one. it should be its. Otherwise, thank you.