Reviews for "Frodo's Words"

Sun Jan 25, 2004 4:44 pm

Right from the start I could tell you knew what you were talking about, which is a good thing, no? You could improve your word choice (as far as I know, I don't think that 'turmoiled', in adjective form, is a word). But, hey, poetic liscense, I guess. Just be cautious about some other little grammatical things, like "I will tread the path that few went" [do you 'go' a path? no, you would walk a path, choose a path, move along a path, etc]. No, poetry does not always have to be grammatically correct, but it has to make enough sense for the reader to understand what you're saying. Also, when writers strive to find some grammatical sense, they tend to come up with more original words, which is always a plus. Keep the poetry coming!

Fri Feb 06, 2004 6:56 am

Thanks, and yeah, I usually abuse English a bit when I wrote poetry ^_~

Sat Feb 07, 2004 10:56 am

Ah, I see you've put up new poetry! hurrah! I'll follow suit, then. Very Happy smiley face

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