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awiinc
Joined: 28 Jan 2004
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Wed Jan 28, 2004 2:09 pm
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Having been in the SCA, I’m enjoying this story a great deal. (I think I recognize the big event you are talking about but I’ll not say anything about that here.) Gwen is a great character. It’s nice to see a strong female elf role. But what I find interesting is the change she is making now that she has found out who she is. There is a subtle difference in her speech but the essence of her nature is the same, very nice.
Legolas is done well so far, and I’m interested in how his story arc progresses, now that Gwen is back. Not to mention, when will these two get together? 
The question remains will she stay? I’m looking forward to finding out.
Good work!
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kinvara
Joined: 18 Feb 2004
Reviews: 58
Location: middle of nowhere, dorset
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Thu Mar 18, 2004 12:16 pm
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| Heyi haven't reviewed yet but i just wanted to say i think this is really well done and i can't wait to find out what will happen next and whether she will be able to save Legolas in time before the orcs get them etc. etc. Anyway can't wait till you post next . Keep writing! |
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 269
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Fri Mar 19, 2004 11:49 am
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| Wow, this is a really great story! I'm very intrigued by the use of...I guess, time travel. I can't wait to find out what happens to Legolas and the princess. Please update soon |
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 269
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Thu Apr 01, 2004 5:49 pm
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Hey, you haven't abandoned us have you? 
I've really enjoyed the story, and would really like to find out what happens...maybe you're just busy, heh? I do hope that you update soon, you're doing a great job! |
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
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Sun May 09, 2004 6:25 pm
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YAY! Finally, an update! I've waited so long for this, I almost gave up hope that you would update. So, we finally understand the who, what and why of Gwen I love the twist, I never would have imagined that Allyon would know and understand about Gwen. Fantastic! So, I have to ask...was that the end? That would be a great ending to the story, but, I'd like to find out what happens when Gwen gets back to ME. You know...what happens with Gwen and Legolas, and do they make it back through the passage safely? Please tell me that's not the end....PLEASE. Ooohh, but maybe if it is the end, it could mean sequel? Maybe? Yes? No?
Whatever the case, I love the story! |
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kinvara
Joined: 18 Feb 2004
Reviews: 58
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Thu May 13, 2004 11:35 am
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| That was really good i thought and i am so happy everthing will be back to normal now(hopefully) Just waiting for the next chapter now. Keep writing i think your work is really good and a really original plot. |
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kinvara
Joined: 18 Feb 2004
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Mon May 24, 2004 7:14 am
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Yey! another chapter and i hope everything goes well for the ceremony and Thiranduil doesn't make too much of a fuss, can't wait for the next chpater  |
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
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Mon May 24, 2004 9:04 am
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Great chapter! I absolutely love Thiranduil's discontented attitude...and I love even MORE the fact that no one pays any attention to his fits of anger!  I really do hope that their joining goes as planned, but I suspect with Thiranduil's presense, that will not happen...but who knows, right?
Well, I guess you know if all will go as planned, right? So, I guess I'll have to wait for the next chapter to find out. So PLEASE post soon...I can't wait to find out what happens next.
So keep up the good work...I be anxiously awaiting your new chapter
Michelle... |
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StArSpLaSh
Joined: 18 Jan 2004
Reviews: 93
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Fri May 28, 2004 11:01 pm
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| wow this is an amazing story! i hope it will not end yet! i want to hear more about their joining and hopefully a little more info on Allyon. |
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
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Thu Jun 24, 2004 6:55 pm
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Aww....Thiranduil finally came to his senses, and accepted Gwen, YAYYY!!!
He's not so bad, I guess. He did after all try to keep Legolas's heart content by keeping him in, uh, 'good company'
So, dish the dirt! Why was Thiranduil so against Gwen and Legolas? And what's with the sudden change of heart? Oooo, you're EVIL for not telling us! Keep updating, I must have answers...
You're doing a wonderful job, thanks for such a great story!
Update soon,
Michelle...... |
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