Reviews for "The Veil"

Mon Jul 19, 2004 8:00 am

I quite like the way you twisted the "Girl falls into Middle Earth" scenario. It was a very pleasant suprise how the tables suddenly turned. Very clever. Very Happy smiley face

Your plot is complex and interesting: it shows that you have given thought to this story. It is great how the events were not predictable at all. Full of suprises. I like that. Smile smiley face

Just a couple of things for your next story (which I hope you write because you are an exellent writer): Get a BETA. It would make your story even better, little mistakes are big distractions. And I believe that Legolas´ father was called Thranduil... without an "i" in there. Wink smiley face

Thu Jul 29, 2004 1:20 pm

That was so funny. I loved the "bad guy" bit trying to slice her leathers...'Don't f* with me ' and then kiking arse! A passed out princess .... I am so looking forward to more.

Fri Aug 20, 2004 5:02 pm

I'm so glad you're still working on this story! Very Happy smiley face

I can't wait to find out how it all ends....keep working on it! I'll be waiting...patiently Very Happy smiley face

Michelle..

Sun Feb 20, 2005 4:58 pm

Hi!

It's been a really long time since you updated this story, and I was wondering if you still planned on finishing it? I'd really like to see the conclusion of this story, but I know that real life IS a priority...unfortunately Very Happy smiley face

Just checking in, though...I hope all is well with you Smile smiley face

Michelle....

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