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sivan
Joined: 30 Oct 2003
Reviews: 57
Location: Mirkwood
Sat Jan 31, 2004 10:07 am
That was wonderful reading.

I love what I read, like to be in the movie.

Sivan
 
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BittenBuggy

Joined: 27 Dec 2003
Reviews: 93
Location: Busy Being the Queen Of Everything.. And Trying to Catch the Yoda-Copter
Sat Jan 31, 2004 12:26 pm
Awww...sweet.
 
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BellemaineChercoeur

Joined: 28 May 2003
Reviews: 106
Location: 
Sun Feb 01, 2004 5:43 am
Lovely, very consistent with movie canon, and beautifully interwoven. Well Done!
 
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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Wed Feb 04, 2004 5:11 pm
There were many moments here I liked - Elrond puzzling at the friendship of Legolas and Gimli; Elrond's farewell to Theoden ... but I found myself wishing in the second half for the intense brevity of the prologue. That was so captivating!
 
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Duchess

Joined: 25 Mar 2004
Reviews: 187
Location: North Carolina
Mon Mar 29, 2004 4:27 pm
Very well done! Smile smiley face
 
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HisieLome
Joined: 17 Jan 2004
Reviews: 133
Location: 
Sat Apr 17, 2004 8:33 pm
This was well done.
 
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KhazarKhum

Joined: 02 Sep 2003
Reviews: 135
Location: Quartz Hill, CA--USA
Sun Aug 29, 2004 2:04 pm
Nicely done; the characaters are consistent with film canon. I am not 100% certain that there needs to be a prologue; the scene with Elrond could just as easily been at the beginning, instead of separate. Considering how brief that scene is, it might be better to simply condense the whole piece int one chapter. Just a thought! Wink smiley face
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Sun Aug 29, 2004 4:13 pm
I enjoyed this, also, but agree with Nancy, it left a little to be desired in the second (also agree this could have been just one) chapter. However, I did also like the bits between Elrond and Theoden, and Elrond's reaction to Legolas' and Gimli's friendship. I dislike intensely the assumption that Elrond was all knowing and all seeing. I like to see him shaken, and even stirred, occasionally. Otherwise, well done. Thank you.
 
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