Reviews for "At Last"

Mon Feb 02, 2004 10:35 pm

I think I'm in heaven (Or Legolas's bedroom, but what's the difference?). I loved "Eternally" and I have no doubt this one will be every bit as good. So far I love it Very Happy smiley face

Ok, ready for more please Twisted Evil smiley face

Tue Feb 03, 2004 5:22 am

I have been waiting for this for too long, why didn't you get it up earlier? Loved the previous one and I'm sure this one's gonna be great too, I love the presentation so far, please update soon!

Tue Feb 10, 2004 3:29 am

A sequel, fantastic. Please don't make us wait to long for the next installment, heck, don't make us wait for their "reunion"!! More please Ilistine

Wed Feb 11, 2004 9:41 am

Using Pip as a link was a great idea. And I cannot blame any single breech on canon, which is amazing, because it's so well drawn. i loved the prequel, and this one is promising to be an isntallment of the same quality. Congratulations to both of you. Cool smiley face

Mon Feb 16, 2004 6:52 am

Yay, it's like a snuggling down with your favourite pillow when authors decide to bring their characters back out to play. I am so glad to see that you are writing this sequel! The writing style is so lyrical, emotional and image laden that it is a pleasure to read. Am looking forward to reading more of it!

Sat Apr 03, 2004 12:46 pm

Second chapter was heaven. It made my day thinking of a wistful! dreamy legolas crossing the Path of the dead.

Mon Apr 19, 2004 8:15 pm

Well done. Having just read "Eternally" , this was a treat. Please continue. Thanks for all of the hard work.....Mina Sedth, Hisie Lome

Sat May 29, 2004 1:16 pm

It's the little details that make your writing so sleek and immersive. For instance, Isobel doens't just magically find a place to stay; her hostess has "given her the use of a small bedroom that had belonged to her eldest daughter, now married." Nice.

The scene on the roof was exquisite. Such a scene, with just internal monologue, should be boring as hell. But yours was not. How do you *do* that??

Pippin remains very true to voice. I loved his subtle teasing when they first met and he was catching her up on events, and her very believable reaction (laughter). Also his patient caretaking, checking in on her. Lovely characterization.

The Pelargir battle knocked my socks off.

And that ch. 3 ending is *not fair*. You must update immediately. I mean it. Smile smiley face

Sat May 29, 2004 11:16 pm

I agree with Viv, utterly unfair! Please update soon!

I just had to review, I love the way you two tell stories. This one is becoming one of my favorites, the fighting on the docks, then Isobel and the attack on Minas Tirith and even the whole thing with the "head", fantastic! I am a devoted fan, and I know you have more instore for your readers, more suspense, more action and hoping soon more Legolas and Isobel!

Thank You for such a great chapter,
Ilistine

Sat Jul 24, 2004 12:45 pm

Wow and incredible! I am breathless the story telling in this latest chapter was marvelous. I felt like I was reading a scene from Gone With the Wind! And all the while I keep thinking when, when will she see Legolas! Oh, absolutely wonderful writing!

Please write more soon!

Christine Very Happy smiley face

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