Reviews for "Mairen - A Life Once Lost"

Sat Apr 17, 2004 3:05 pm

It's amazing! I can't wait for more... Very Happy smiley face

Mon Apr 26, 2004 11:11 pm

We wants moooooooooooooooore! Bounce smiley face

Great job, Fianna!

Sun May 02, 2004 8:48 pm

I absolutely love this story! Great plot and great characters...what more could I ask for??? Well, come to think of it...how about an update Very Happy smiley face

Yeah! An update would be great Smile smiley face

Love the story, please update soon and keep up the good work.

Michelle

I'll be checking back for that update Very Happy smiley face

Tue May 04, 2004 7:55 pm

Fianna,
Everything you write is so wonderful! The depth of your stories is astounding and absolutely worthy of Tolkien's amazing characters. I see now why the Valar have brought her back in the body of a human. Her prior distate for humans and refusal to be compassionate to them was her undoing. I understand Mairen's anxiety to keep her own identity. I think the eventual outcome will be a wise and compassionate warrior who is now worthy of Haldir's attention. I really liked that Haldir helped the humans and corrected her on that issue.

The worry stone as a link to Celeborn is a fascinating idea as well. You have very skillfully conveyed her anxiety, the extent of her weariness, and fear of what she cannot control. Her dislike for the she elf is also a great twist!

This was a very exciting chapter at the end. The battle was very realistic...especially her self harm to avoid the darkness while trying to fight off those horrid Orcs. I really hope her brothers are well.

The saying at the end about her being in the best of hands was just PERFECT! How true. I can't imaging better hands to be in. *sigh*

Please update soon. I am enthralled with this story...actually all of your stories. You have tremendous talent and I look forward to your future projects as well.

Talasi
Haldir Worshiper, Wanton Elfbanger, and Keeper of Erestor's Heart

Wed May 05, 2004 6:00 am

Great! A nice chapter full of emotion! A very realistic battle!

Cheers,
Mona

Fri Jun 04, 2004 7:09 pm

A wonderful new chapter! Perhaps not the most original of ideas, but this is a very enchanting way of writing it! A charming new chapter! Please, please update Soon smiley face

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Fri Jun 04, 2004 10:26 pm

I really enjoy your story!

Sat Jun 26, 2004 8:25 am

This has developed into an intriguing story and I'm now gripped. I was not totally convinced by the characterisation up to and including chapter 3, and even though now I understand the connection between H and M I still think the first kiss was a bit out of the blue. However, it's got SO interesting and more complex than I first thought that I am very much looking forward to future updates. I am now really enjoying H and M's personalities. As always, VERY well structured and written. Thank you!

Sat Jul 17, 2004 10:34 am

Yay! I loved the new chapter! So great! Please, please update soon!!! Very Happy smiley face

Fri Aug 06, 2004 6:11 pm

This is a wonderful story. I really have enjoyed how you have developed the characters and it is an interesting idea to have the fea of an elf in a mortal body. It will be hard on Mairen though to watch her brothers and friends grow old. But well done!!

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