| Author | Review |
|---|
ancksunamun668
Joined: 08 Jun 2004 Reviews: 17
Location:
|
|
Wed Sep 01, 2004 12:39 am
|
|
|
| I really enjoy this story - I hope that you update soon! Such original ideas too - I like that it's not the same dribble that seems to reappear every time you turn around! Keep writing! |
|
|
|
|
|
|
 |
draegon
Joined: 01 Jul 2004 Reviews: 41
Location:
|
|
Sun Oct 03, 2004 10:10 pm
|
|
|
| I feel horrible about what Mairen said to Haldir. True, she only thought she was making things easier. I can't wait to see what Haldir has planned to get Mairen to leave with him. Perhaps he could get Eomer in on it, since he said he was going to play on her sense of responsibilities to Rohan. |
|
|
|
|
|
|
 |
ellie
Joined: 30 Aug 2004 Reviews: 110
Location: Where I am now.
|
|
Tue Nov 23, 2004 8:25 pm
|
|
|
Chpater 14 is very good! I want her to marry Haldir! Why is she so stubborn? Loved her remembering her "night" with Haldir. NOw I have to go read that again in the other chapter. sigh....
Please update again soon!
Ellie |
|
|
|
|
|
|
 |
Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004 Reviews: 269
Location:
|
|
Thu Nov 25, 2004 10:49 pm
|
|
|
Eomer's intervention was quite a twist. I would have never thought that he cared so much about Mairen and her well being, that he would make these kinds of arrangements just to ensure her happiness. How wonderful! I loved the interaction between Haldir and Mairen...I can't believe that she still doubts what is truly in her heart.
I can't wait to find out what's going to happen...
Update soon,
Michelle... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
 |
Jomitsui
Joined: 24 Dec 2003 Reviews: 29
Location: Singapore
|
|
Fri Dec 03, 2004 11:14 pm
|
|
|
It is always difficult to choose between responsibility (especially those impose by yourself) to what your heart really wants to do. Indeed sometimes people will rather try to hid....bury and forget what they really want to prevent themselves from getting hurt and becoming sad. Most of the times, others sees better than them.
You managed to capture the feelings and the reactions really will....hehe....what will mairen do when she found out where the proposal came from. Will she be angry? Relieve? Stay or flee? Wow....can't wait for another chapter to post and see her reaction, of course and how Haldir and Mairen will meet. |
|
|
|
|
|
|
 |
DreadLadyFreya

Joined: 31 Mar 2004 Reviews: 76
Location: A fantasy world, with beach front property
|
|
Wed Jan 05, 2005 6:48 pm
|
|
|
Aargh! How can you leave us dangling off this cliffie? An incredible, meaty, LONG chappie. I loved it! Well worth the wait. Can't wait to see what will become of our favorite March Warden, not to mention the horrible end I'm sure you have in mind for Harad.  |
|
|
|
|
|
|
 |
Talasi
Joined: 29 Mar 2004 Reviews: 116
Location: Haldir\'s Lap
|
|
Wed Jan 05, 2005 7:43 pm
|
|
|
Wonderful chapter, Fianna. That stubborn Mairen is going to get herself or someone else killed. She definitely needs to listen to Haldir. I hope he is okay. Please update soon. Harad is clearly quite mad.
Stunning.....superb.....excellent.....wonderful.....*running out of words*
Hugs,
Talasi |
|
|
_________________
Last edited by Talasi on Wed Jan 12, 2005 5:54 pm |
|
|
|
|
 |
draegon
Joined: 01 Jul 2004 Reviews: 41
Location:
|
|
Thu Jan 06, 2005 12:59 am
|
|
|
| I'm glad Mairen figured out that it was Haldir she's to marry. I hope they all can forgive her for wanting to fight. I'm sure she'll find a way out of the hall. But I do feel bad for her in the fact that everyone lied to her. |
|
|
|
|
|
|
 |
ellie
Joined: 30 Aug 2004 Reviews: 110
Location: Where I am now.
|
|
Wed Jan 12, 2005 8:27 pm
|
|
|
| Nicely done. Poor Haldir to be joining himself to someone who is as head strong as he is, if he survives to marry her. I like the way she found out who she is to marry. Hope Hal is okay, he is such a great elf. Love this story! |
|
|
|
|
|
|
 |
Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004 Reviews: 269
Location:
|
|
Thu Jan 13, 2005 3:34 pm
|
|
|
I could very clearly picture Mairen's face when she realized who she was to wed. Poor Haldir, he must really love her, to put up with her antics.
And speaking of Haldir...is he going to be okay? He seemed to be in a little bit of trouble when we last saw him. I can't wait to find out how that whole situation will unfold!
I hope that Mairen has learned her lesson, and will listen to what her brothers and Haldir tell her to do from now on. Why didn't she stay hidden when they told her to? Tsk, tsk, Mairen!
Fantastic update, Fianna! I can't wait for your next update.
Michelle... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
 |
|