Joined: 27 Dec 2003 Reviews: 93
Location: Busy Being the Queen Of Everything.. And Trying to Catch the Yoda-Copter
Tue Feb 03, 2004 9:06 pm
Awww...so sweet. I love elflings! (My discovery of the day) Off to read more....
NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003 Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Wed Feb 11, 2004 3:46 pm
A charming vision of Elven domesticity, particularly in its simplicity and nicely defined scope. You add a lot of wonderful details - the decorating, the love between family members, Legolas's crown of Holly, when he and his father wrinkle noses and touch foreheads - without letting them overwhelm your tight story.
Perhaps I was reading too fast but I almost missed the transition from memory to current time, as it were. Maybe a little something could be put at the beginning to let us know that part is memory? or in the transition to make it a bit less subtle? A minor complaint.
ViJanaway
Joined: 07 May 2004 Reviews: 78
Location: Near Dallas, Texas
Sun Aug 15, 2004 5:59 pm
Sheriah
You are the absolute best chronicler of the Mirkweek Royal Family. I love this one.
Vi