Reviews for "Elanor's Revenge"

Sun Jan 23, 2005 11:03 pm

Please tell me that Haldir isn't going to die!! I'd have to start crying or something. But I'm sure he'll live. I think Elanor needs to tell her friends about what's been going on with Lurien.

Mon Jan 24, 2005 4:00 am

Wow wow... Shocked smiley face

Will Haldir die? (If so many including me will wanna strangle you....)
What troubles would Lurien cause? Or what else will happen to him...
How everyone will react to Haldir's fall... how Elanor will react.
Wow...Wow... Shocked smiley face

Mon Jan 24, 2005 9:21 am

That was brilliantly written, as always, but the added dimension of the fighting imagery really adds to the story, I really love the ambiguity that Haldir's feelings add to the concept of his fighting, it adds a realism to the fic that's really great, not just following the concept of 'everything being perfect', it also creates an uncertainty as to whether it will eventually work between them. I love this new element! It makes me even more desperate to read the next chapter, brilliantly and cleverly written, you certainly know how to keep a reader hooked!

Mon Jan 24, 2005 11:12 am

Elanor's evolution has been a joy to observe. She is now considering the consequences of her actions, before making hasty decisions. Hopefully, she'll make the right decision when it comes to dealing with Lurien...whatever that may be. Lurien is certainly turning into quite a cad! I can't believe he actually implied that Elanor do such a thing. What about his love for Tarwe? Revenge seems to be his number one priority.

I'm happy that Ture is finally happy, and seeking new love. I can't wait to see how her quest for love unfolds. Very Happy smiley face

And Haldir...poor, poor Haldir. He'll be okay, won't he? Poor Elanor! What is she going to sense, now that Haldir has been injured? Will she blame herself for his distraction? It was also great to see Rumil's brave actions during the battle. How could Nerwen possibly resist such a heroic elf?!

I can't wait for the next chapter! Very Happy smiley face

I know it will probably be a while, but that's okay. You ladies' updates are always well worth the wait Wink smiley face

Great job!

Michelle...

Mon Jan 24, 2005 7:17 pm

I must apologize for reading and following your wonderful fic, without ever (I think) reviewing...I know that reviews are important for writers. Now, I must say that I've followed your story for an age now, and it never ceases to satisfy! Julie and Fianna, I love this story! Elanor is such a lovable character! And your portrayal of Haldir is excellent!! And I love the fact that you've included the other brothers, and your OC's are so enjoyable also!!!

I must say that I've loved all of your fics that I've read, and this one never quits yet! Kudos, please keep up the good work! I'm in complete agreement with the previous reviewer, that the length of time between reviews doesn't matter with you guys, the quality is so outstanding!

Sincerely,
Sakai

Tue Jan 25, 2005 9:37 am

Like the previous reviewer, I am sorry to have followed your story for so long w/ no feedback! Please accept my sincerest compliments on your beautiful and intriguing writing. Your portrayal of the virtues and flaws in all your characters, from Haldir to Lurien, draws your readers in and makes us truly care about what happens to them. Also - that last fight scene was amazing! I was on the edge of my seat, picturing every movement, seeing every arrow fly by! Even your depiction of Haldir's vs. Rumil's fighting styles seemed right within their characters.
Thank you for sharing this story with us, and I can't wait to see what happens next!

Archerlove

Tue Jan 25, 2005 6:34 pm

Hoorah - was worried that you girls had got sidetracked by RL or something worse... Lovely to get an update: lots of tension! PLEASE don't let Elanor succumb to Lurien: I really don't think Haldir could forgive that, though love can forgive most things. I've never tried to write a battle scene and I think this is a really good balance of 'technical' description : what-blow-fell-where along with what-it-feels-like. Nice. I trust Elanor will 'feel' Haldir's wound in the next chaper? I think bringing Elrond and company back in to the story now is introducing a good dynamic and I am SO looking forward to the next update! Thanks so much Very Happy smiley face

Fri Jan 28, 2005 8:07 am

wonderful update:

Umm, still think that Lurien needs Tarwe to slap some sense into him, make him look utterly foolish or something like that.

I really am glad that Nerwen and Rumil are finally starting to come around and realize their feeligns about each other, now that Haldir and Elanor are going alright they've become my favorite character and I can't wait to see what Rumil has planned for the courtship.

Glad to see the Rivendell elves again, hope that Ture finds her elf.

The only thing I didn't like, Haldir's hurt, and you made us wait so long for an update! Hmmph, update again sometime soon!

Fri Jan 28, 2005 11:10 am

I'm so glad you updated it. Very Happy smiley face

This chapter is brilliant, like all the others. I specially liked the way Ellie treated Luthien (he deserves it). Bounce smiley face

Since you decided to bring Elanor’s friends to the picture, why not Lana and her parents? Lana must apologize all the things she has done to her sister, and why not have her solve the problem with Luthien, she seems quite capable to give him a taste of his own medicine? Twisted Evil smiley face

(Just a suggestion, don’t get made with me…….please) Surprised smiley face

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Sat Jan 29, 2005 11:32 pm

Ok A: write more please!!! I need to know what happens!!! B: Do not let Elanor go to Lurien: she loves Haldir and Haldir loves her!!! and finally, C: Haldir MUST live!!! I will be heartbroken if he does not. Thanks so much for updating, it was just as good as the rest of the story and made me hungry for more.

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