Reviews for "Elanor's Revenge"

Sat Jun 11, 2005 2:25 pm

Bravo! This was, yet another, excellent chapter, ladies. Smile smiley face

I jumped for joy for Rumil and Nerwen, and then turned around and felt like strangling Lurien. Hopefully, Doria or Tarwe will be able to get through to him...although that doesn't seem very likely. But you never know, right?

Elanor's dedication and love for Haldir continues to enchant, and inspire me. We all knew that she was very a very loyal being, but she really has stepped-up to the plate and asserted herself as Haldir's caretaker. I love it!

You ladies are amazing! Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful work...

Michelle...

Mon Jun 13, 2005 4:07 pm

Though I'm only on this site for one day as a full member,
I have already read whole your story!

I love it, I love it, I love it!

This was my second FanFic I ever read... And I totally adore it!!!

Tue Jun 14, 2005 4:38 pm

What a great chapter! GO RUMIL! GO NERWEN!
Well, whoever described your wonderful fanfic as a *soap opera* was right on the mark ! (was it you Julie?)
Your excellent story, with your excellent updates is worth the wait!

Thanks!! Sincerely, sakai

Mon Jun 20, 2005 12:43 pm

Did i say I love this story?, did I ?...really?..... well just to make sure I will say it again - I LOVE THIS STORY! Very Happy smiley face

Wed Jun 29, 2005 11:04 pm

I love this story, too. I started this elsewhere and just found this site. Please keep writing for us, your fans.

Wed Jul 06, 2005 2:57 pm

This could have been 50,000 words and it still would not be long enough! I cannot wait for Haldir to get better! At least well enough to use certain parts without much pain.... mmmmmm...

I hate to harp on this but, PLEEEEAAAASSSSEEEE hurry with the next chapter!!!! I am dying to find out about my favorite elves!!! You guys paint the picture so well that I get totally caught up in their world!

Thanks for the fantabulous read!! (is so a word)

Lori Anne

Sat Jul 09, 2005 5:56 am

I feel really bad about not reviewing for the last chapter, I am just so sorry but RL has really been keeping me rather busy recently, so, as a result, I am going to give you a VERY long review for the two chapters (sort of two reviews combined in one) and I am going to bore you both silly so be prepared I warn you!

I was extremely relieved to find that Nerwen and Rumil were finally able to be straight with each other as you two have been keeping us poor readers in suspense upon this story line for FAR too long, I mean we can only take so much punishment upon this! You are just able to capture their relationship and the tension in such a way that it makes the poor reader scream at the screen (not speaking from experience of course), or give a loud exclamation of 'NO!' at Rumil's awful timing, or maybe, simply the terrible unfairness of timing in general. It just seems to have been the cause of many mishaps in this poor pair's relationship!

Was very nice to see a personal moment between Celeborn and Galadriel, as it gave them a rather natural side that many stories often seen to miss as they are so concerned with the continuation of their own couple's story. The reference to the broth was a lovely touch that linked them to Elanor and Haldir, it gave their relationship a rather realistic and sweet side, something that the reader was able to connect with.

One thing that I find funny about this fic is that all the couples are intertwined in some way, and it gives it a nice sense of continuity; that connection almost reminds me of something supernatural...okay, I think I'm reading a bit to far into this. But it's just lovely how all the relationships are intertwined and the characters seem able to relate to each other so much better through it.

Anyway, I will shut up now, it was a wonderful chapter, well written as usual, and please update soon (as I think everyone keeps asknig you), also, the large length is brilliant!

Wed Jul 13, 2005 12:49 am

just read chapter 28 and am grinnng like a cheshire cat! Very Happy smiley face

All I want now if for Haldir to be healed and up and back to his own warrior self and ready to do battle for Elenor - as I sense troubling times ahead for our love birds!

Another fine piece of writing ladies, your talent is unequaled!

Wed Jul 13, 2005 10:39 am

You know, I don't know how you ladies manage to continually write such wonderful chapters. It really is amazing. The plotlines for your characters are just so darn intriguing! I can't help but to love this story.

The Tarwe and Lurien drama really is heartbreaking. Healea's intervention will hopefully get Lurien to realize exactly how aweful he's being to Tarwe. After all, she does not have to be with him...she could easily just be rid of him, and *ATTEMPT* to seek companionship elsewhere. You know, I'm starting to like Healea more and more. She'd be a great friend to have.

Rumil and Nerwen are hoot! I love Rumil's playful nature. He and Nerwen compliment each other well. As for Orophin and Doria, I'm so glad that they've decided to bond. They've loved each other for so long...it's about time.

And of course Haldir and Elanor. Whew. I'm still anxious to hear them say to one another, "I love you." Of course, they know it...everyone knows it...but when will they say it to each other.

The letters to Elanor really made me realize how much Elanor has changed...how much her life has changed. What a brat her sister is! Whew...

And so now I'm on pins and needles wondering what this vision of Galadriel's is about. Ohhh, I can't wait to find out. Very Happy smiley face

Fantastic chapter, ladies!

Michelle...

Wed Aug 31, 2005 9:17 pm

OMG! Lurien has yet to meld reality with his fantasies. I could be very hurtful to Eleanor. I hope Haldir is well enough soon to kick his butt.

Thank you so much for the latest chapter and I hope RL doesn't continue to keep you away from this for so long.

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