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Eruwesteth
Joined: 22 Aug 2006 Reviews: 16
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Wed Oct 11, 2006 4:23 am
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Yay! I'm glad Lurien and Haldir have reconciled (for a part) honestly, I would have put Lana on Elrohirs horse then had the horse bolt, that would hopefully teach her a lesson... Great chapter anyway...
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LadyBluejay

Joined: 03 Feb 2005 Reviews: 126
Location: UK
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Wed Oct 11, 2006 1:30 pm
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| I had given you up - glad you did not leave us in the lurch. A great story - well written. Hope to be able to read more soon. LBJ |
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Ireth34

Joined: 18 Oct 2006 Reviews: 4
Location: Ontario, Canada
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Mon Oct 23, 2006 4:24 pm
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Love it! Can't wait to read more!  |
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LadyBluejay

Joined: 03 Feb 2005 Reviews: 126
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Thu Dec 14, 2006 2:04 pm
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| Thanks for the Xmas present - lovley as usual. I will be sad when it ends LBJ |
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marcia

Joined: 10 Jun 2004 Reviews: 53
Location: California
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Thu Dec 14, 2006 2:30 pm
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| Julie, Thank you so much for updating. I've been longing for another chapter. Printing and running off to read. Happy, happy holidays to you and Fianna! |
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marcia

Joined: 10 Jun 2004 Reviews: 53
Location: California
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Thu Dec 14, 2006 10:51 pm
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| How sweet! And satisfying!! You never disappoint your readers; each chapter is full of resolution and developing plot and character. This story has been a true pleasure to read and it's winding down to a delightful ending for all the characters. Thank you both so very much for being so wonderful to us out here in fandom. xo! |
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004 Reviews: 269
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Sat Dec 16, 2006 12:20 am
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What a wonderful chapter!
What I like most about this story, is how ‘round’ all of your characters are - each has evolved and developed in some subtle, and some not so subtle, ways. I like that Haldir has not changed very much in his ways (except for the romance department), and that he is not outwardly, sappily romantic – after all, could Elanor truly love him if she did not accept him as his is. And let’s not even get me started on Lurien…talk about a 360…
I’ve said before that I have a soft spot for Lurien, and that continues to be true. I’m hoping that Tarwe watching him means that they will be together soon – they both seem to be suffering. The arrival of Elanor’s parents answered quite a few questions I had about them. I’m glad that Elanor’s father realizes that he has been negligent in his duties – even though I sort of understand why he and his wife are so completely enraptured with one another. I happy for Tel, and I hope Minden gets the girl.
The love scene at the end was incredibly romantic. The anticipation, hesitance, love, romance and tenderness came across very clearly. It was so good that I felt like I was intruding on a very private moment. Excellent job ladies! Thank you so much for the early Christmas gift!
Happy Holidays!
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draegon
Joined: 01 Jul 2004 Reviews: 41
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Sat Dec 16, 2006 10:48 pm
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| I'm glad Elanor survived the initial meeting with her parents. I don't trust having Lana there with her. I'm sure she's going to try something. Good thing Minden is keeping an eye on her. I'm glad Haldir fully intends to marry Elanor, and I understand his desire to wait. |
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sculder
Joined: 16 Aug 2003 Reviews: 12
Location: Sacramento, CA
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Sun Dec 17, 2006 10:37 pm
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All I have to say is "Thank goodness!" I have to confess, though, that I refused to read (more like reread) this story until it was pretty much finished because I'm very impatient with WIPs! But, obviously, two years later here I am! And this was certainly worth the wait! And thanks for the acknowledgement by the way!
Hm... just waiting for that happy sappy ending! This was a lovely story! |
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RoxieRxChicago

Joined: 15 May 2005 Reviews: 108
Location: Kentucky
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Thu Dec 21, 2006 10:18 am
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| Great chapter ladies! And well worth the wait. You have done such a wonderful job of creating this beautiful story. The characters are so well-rounded, and the plot well-developed. It is obvious that you put a great deal of thought into each and every chapter. I hope the twins really do have some sort of mischief planned for Lana... Looking forward to the next update! |
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