Reviews for "Elanor's Revenge"

Tue Mar 30, 2004 1:28 pm

Awesome chapter! I laughed at Haldir's first attempt to become a warden, I can just picture him falling face down while trying to pull off some cool move Very Happy smiley face

Hilarious! And Halea quoting Haldir was a nice touch (I liked those lines as well).
I'm sooooo impatient to see what happens next.... Update ASAP Smile smiley face

Tue Mar 30, 2004 6:48 pm

More...please. Laughing smiley face

Tue Mar 30, 2004 7:23 pm

Girls, I have my jaw on the floor! I don’t care how long you you take to update as long as you give the readers such perfect chapters like this one. Bow smiley face

I loved the contest, all those emotions flowing around, and seeing the other side of Healea. I must confess that when she appeared, I thought she would humiliate Elanor, and not help her as she did. That sentence she quoted from Haldir was simply outstanding. Best of all was seeing you get all elements that could become ordinary –like Elanor winning the competition or her acceptance of Haldir’s offer – and turn them into something original and brilliant! Elanor’s refusal was something precious to read and Haldir deserved it. Go Elanor, go! Bounce smiley face

Tue Mar 30, 2004 10:25 pm

Finally... I've enjoyed this as much as you guys n' gals did. It's nice to know that Lord Celeborn actually is able of blackmailing Haldir about it! =)

Wed Mar 31, 2004 3:56 am

GREAT. I absolutely loved it! One thing i want to mention is could you give a time reference? Elanor is supposed to stay with Haldir for a year and a day, so by Chap 18 how much time has passed already? Love your story!! Was hanging around for your story to update.. pathetic right? Laughing smiley face

i was re-reading the chaps mainly on haldir and elanor.. Wink smiley face

please, PLEASE spare us the torture and UPDATE SOON!!! Very Happy smiley face

Wed Mar 31, 2004 7:30 am

WOO HOO!

New chapter YAY. It was sooooo worth the wait, love the way you handled the achery competition. Very nicley done, and elanor and Haldir, god i love em. theyre fantastic.

Next time RL tries to interfere you send the culprits my way and ill sort them. You guys have more important things to be doing. Laughing smiley face

Cant wait to see what happens next

Thu Apr 01, 2004 12:13 am

I loved this new chapter. I am so impressed with the way you depicted Haldir's self-control and then his desire. Man-o-man, that was a great ending to that chapter.

Hope RL doesn't get in the way, I am dying to see where you two take this story next.

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Sat Apr 03, 2004 3:53 am

Please dont make us wait so long for a chapter again... update! update! and hurry up with the real smut.. Twisted Evil smiley face

Sun Apr 04, 2004 7:07 pm

thia is a great fic...i can't wait untill u will update.

Tue Apr 06, 2004 10:48 am

I stumbled on this (actually, this entire archive) quite by accident and have been amazed at the wide range of fiction to be found. There is bad, there is boring, there is wild romping, and there is the skillfully, delightully done.

This ladies, is the later.

Despite the most curious beginnings, and my dire prayer, oh please do not be a "female tromps all over noble warden of the woods and he turns into a total wimp bag" story , this has turned into a wonderfully romantic tale.

Yes, there IS a place for romance. A very important place. And the genre is not one to be frowned upon or treated lightly.

You have woven a heady tale of wonderful light pastels that are soothing to the eye and pleasing to the pallate. That Elanor will snare the arrogant Haldir, I have no doubt. That Haldir will teach her of all things sensual and sexy, I have no doubt. But in the meantime, I wait each update, to watch the dance.

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