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esmeralda

Joined: 05 Feb 2004
Reviews: 11
Location: France
Tue Apr 13, 2004 7:57 am

Hi ladies, I love chapter 18 (I love the whole story actually) the archery competition (especially appreciate the fact that you did not make Elanor win!) and the incredibly hot birthday present Shocked smiley face Can't wait for you to update!!! Please? Smile smiley face Oh and who is Rumil's lady??? I hope we'll know soon...
 
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talwyn
Joined: 20 Feb 2004
Reviews: 4
Location: 
Tue Apr 13, 2004 2:33 pm

Elanor...you go, girl! Give him back a little of his own.

I loved Chapter 18...please, PLEASE update soon.
 
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 269
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Fri Apr 23, 2004 2:58 pm

Elanor is quite a sassy thing isn't she! I really love the character of Elanor, and the romance that you've created between her and Haldir...I'm really enjoying this story...so...I really hope that you'll update soon ...PLEASE update soon Very Happy smiley face
 
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003
Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
Sat May 01, 2004 9:22 am

I loved Chapter 19~! Finally.... you have -no- idea how long I waited for it... hehe....
 
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
Sat May 01, 2004 10:48 am

I adored it! And that scene with Rumil... *starts sobbing*..... It was a lovely chapter! More please! Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face

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boz4PM
Joined: 01 Dec 2003
Reviews: 38
Location: London, UK
Sat May 01, 2004 5:47 pm

TWO chapters?!! How did I miss you updating TWO MORE chapters?! Shocked smiley face They were wonderulf, wonderous... SO good. *sigh* FINALLY Haldir is letting his guard down with her, and he came ALL the way from the fences just for her... *bounces hugely* MORE! It's wonderful! MORE! Very Happy smiley face
 
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 269
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Sat May 01, 2004 9:11 pm

Awww, how romantic! He's finally beginning to underatand that loving Elanor is NOT a bad thing, maybe I should use the word bad...perhaps he sees it as undutiful. Whatever the case, I'm happy that he's beginning to think clearly.

And Elanor's conversation with her friend...about the dress Laughing smiley face Too funny! I was embarrassed for her Very Happy smiley face

So, Im looking forward the the new update Smile smiley face Hopefully, we won't have to wait too long Very Happy smiley face
I'll be checking back Wink smiley face


Michelle
 
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Ania

Joined: 08 Sep 2003
Reviews: 55
Location: Britain
Mon May 03, 2004 5:06 am

Yaay, you updates, I found this one a couple of months ago and couldn't help being really delighted by the style of it, I loved the reality of the development of the relationship between Elanor and Haldir, Haldir's character is portrayed in the most realistic and believeable way, it's a brilliantly written piece, please update soon! Razz smiley face
 
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Gwenevere

Joined: 06 Apr 2004
Reviews: 25
Location: United States
Sat May 08, 2004 8:21 pm

At first I thought this was an MS fic, and boy am I glad that I was mistaken! I love Elanor's character, and I do not find her at all MS-ish. She is kind, caring, and sweetly innocent (but not in a silly, irritating way). I am pleased with your portrayal of Haldir- his romantic side is not unrealistic, and there is almost always a trace of that arrogance, which I am hoping he does not lose as he becomes more involved with Elanor Smile smiley face. I hope all turns out well for your fair flower; she most certainly deserves it. Excellent story. I am enjoying it immensely.


PS Haldir's self-control is very impressive, and I would commend him for holding out for so long hehehehe Laughing smiley face

PPS I cannot express how happy I am that you did not have Elanor become an expert archer within weeks! I have grown weary of fics where the heroine learns the skills of a warrior too quickly to be realistic.
 
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Nienna
Joined: 22 May 2004
Reviews: 24
Location: England
Sat May 29, 2004 1:43 pm

Have just finished chapters 1-11 in one read:brilliant battle of the sexes stuff, good sparring, nice humour, loads of sexual tension... a wonderful interpretation of Haldir, which really works for this reader! Can't wait to catch up with the rest of the chapters.... Smile smiley face
 
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