Reviews for "Elanor's Revenge"

Wed Jun 02, 2004 4:16 pm

Well, it was certainly worth the wait! A wonderful new chapter.. very sweet! Very Happy smiley face

Wed Jun 02, 2004 4:52 pm

Chapter 20 was very touching. Despite the change in their relationship, Haldir and Elanor stay in character, which I find enjoyable. Tsk tsk, all this waiting is making me anxious. I do hope that all those spiteful elves running around don't cause trouble Wink smiley face

. Great chapter: lovely descriptions and dialogue. I don't mean to be pushy, but please hurry with the next chapter!

Wed Jun 02, 2004 9:49 pm

*giggles* Aww, poor Rumil, even the birds have turned against him Very Happy smiley face

This was a WONDERFUL chapter, I cannot begin to praise it as much as I would like! I do hope the next update comes soon, but if the chapters continue to maintain this level of quality, I think I could stand to wait a bit.

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Wed Jun 02, 2004 10:07 pm

You cannot stop it there and expect me to wait a month!!!!!!!!!!!!! *whimpers intelligibly*. Crying or Very sad smiley face

I have yet to review this story, which I should be summarily dismissed for, but all I can say is that this is by far my most favorite Haldir chapter story ever. It inspired me to write my own story, because you brought into the light just what a lovable, though haughty, elf Haldir could be! Twisted Evil smiley face

The story line is amazing and I could only wish to write as well as you two can! Thank you for such a wonderful story. It is a true masterpiece. Work In Progress smiley face

Thu Jun 03, 2004 9:32 am

Amazing...what else can I say? The descriptions in this story are so vivid, it's spectacular! The symbolism of the trees and the flowers ***sighs***so beautiful. I love Haldir, he's one of my favorite characters because of his perceived aloofness. He's a complex character and I always enjoy reading stories that show different aspects of his personality.

The relationship between Haldir and Elanor, it's caring and sweet, yet, controlling and lustful Twisted Evil smiley face

I love it! I really enjoyed the fact that you also let us know that Elanor had been fascinated with Haldir, before the winking incident. That was good to know. She had been to self-conscious, or shy, to approach him...oh, how she's changed! You've captured the anticipation of Elanor and Haldir beautifully. I'm also happy that you've made Healea (sorry if i spelled her name wrong) into a caring person. I just can't imagine Haldir being with someone completely horrible. And Rumil, poor poor Rumil. Even the birds are having better luck than he is. I loved that entire scene! So funny, and yet, I could not help but feel sorry for him.

I absolutely love this story, everything about it is wonderful. I'll be anxiously awaiting your next installment.

Michelle

Tue Jun 08, 2004 7:22 am

No you can't just leave it like that! If you are you better update soon because there are going to be some very angry readers if you leave it for a long time./ Anyway i thought that chapter was very sweet and very gripping, and a=there is a rather large liffhanger at the end too but anyway can't wqait fopr the next chapter. Please make it soon!

Thu Jun 10, 2004 5:10 pm

I LOVE this story. Discovered it about 3 days ago and have been reading and rereading late into the night....sneaking out of bed after hubby falls asleep to return to the computer!

Thank you sooooo, sooooo much!!!

If there's some way to can send this story to Craig Parker, I think he'd love it. Seems to me to be very much the Haldir he created.

Moremoremore, please post more!

Mon Jun 21, 2004 8:21 pm

LOL! I love the poem!

Wed Jun 23, 2004 10:56 am

A great poem! Wonderful, its absolutely amazing! PLease, please update soon!!!!!! Very Happy smiley face

Fri Jun 25, 2004 2:37 am

I am going to bask in the glow of a satisfying experience ... and make praises later.

Smokin' smiley face

Truly a wonderfully written and well executed scene(s) in this chapter, for which I give you two kudos. I've tried such scenes many times and failed miserably... but you two have it mastered. Could have killed Orophin though, but at least Haldir had a lock on the door!

But then you had to end such a blissful chapter with foreboding from the mirror.... Sad smiley face

Now I am worried!!!!

Anyway... wonderful, wonderful and I cannot wait for more!

Losille

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