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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
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Fri Jun 25, 2004 7:56 am
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A wonderful new chapter! Well written... and the scene with Orophin and Rumil was hilarious! PLease, please update soon!!  |
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Nienna
Joined: 22 May 2004
Reviews: 24
Location: England
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| OH MY ... Couldn't resist leaving another review... had to read chapter 21 in two chunks because, like Haldir, I got interrupted in the middle. I thought you were going to be cruel to us and leave us hanging on, like Elanor! Fantastic stuff ladies, though I don't know where 'kiss me you big lug' came from - surely not elvish?! And now you leave us worrying with Galadriel about what is going to happen to spoil all this happiness. PLEASE don't take too long to update! |
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Gwenevere
Joined: 06 Apr 2004
Reviews: 25
Location: United States
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Fri Jun 25, 2004 5:59 pm
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Wonderful chapter- keep up the fantastic work (and don't make us wait too long  ) |
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 269
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Fri Jun 25, 2004 8:20 pm
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Whew! I actually felt like Elanor, anticipating the inevitable moment. That was great! The little interuption was hilarious, I can only imagine what Haldir's and Elanor's faces looked liked when they heard that knock at the door.  The love scene was so beautiful. Haldir being attentive, and Elanor being nervous and anzious...it was perfect.
Poor Rumil, I really hope that whatever secret his lovely elleth is keeping from him does not keep them seperated for too long. She seems to truly care for him, and it would be unfortunate if they were not able to act on their love for one another.
Well, I, of course, LOVE THIS STORY! I can't get enough! The two of you are truly amazing for coming up with such a wonderfully romantic and enchanting story. Keep up the good work and update soon.
Michelle. |
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talwyn
Joined: 20 Feb 2004
Reviews: 4
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Fri Jun 25, 2004 11:11 pm
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| Chapter 21 was well worth the wait. It does, of course, come with a problem - it makes your faithful readers impatient for more! Well done, well-handled scenes. The time and effort you are putting into this tale is very evident. |
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Rede
Joined: 02 Jun 2004
Reviews: 46
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Fri Jun 25, 2004 11:59 pm
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“Now we are going to take a bath together. I am going to wash you with excessive thoroughness and attention to detail. You can wash me too, if you like.”
“Oh really? And what makes you think we can both fit in there at the same time?”
He glanced down with a quirky smile. “I know a way, Elanor. Trust me.”
..... Thank you. Thank you VERY much. Not only did I choke up my wonderfully SCALDING tea all over myself, but my computer screen got a much unneeded shower as well. OUUUCH!
But well worth the pain I must say. That was HILARIOUS!
...oh, and there aren't many works out there that want me to go an' jump the bones of my boyfriend after I read them...but this is defineately one of them! (I'm sure you didn't want to know that though...) Can't wait for more! Elanor and Haldir are so lucky. |
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AzureDragoness
Joined: 11 Jan 2004
Reviews: 183
Location: Greater Metropolitan Area of the District of Columbia
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Sun Jun 27, 2004 6:35 pm
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*glances at Rede's review* Nope, don't wanna jump the bones of my boyfried.... but now, I do wish I had one Ahhh, I believe you have now made all your readers happy, complete, fufiled.... insert other such adjectives here, I can't think-- still too happy. Oooooh, but that bit with Galariel at the end: spellbinding! Very effective for keeping us reading..... 'course, I can't think of a single reason not to keep reading anyways  Well, I await the next chapter. Oh, and I hope Rumil gets his love life sorted out! |
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kwannom
Joined: 08 Jan 2004
Reviews: 67
Location: Brazil
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Mon Jun 28, 2004 6:46 pm
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WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW
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Sorry girls, I think I lost my ability of thinking coherently after reading that chapter.
Oh, before I push "add review", there is one last thing I would like to tell you:
WOW!
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SunStar
Joined: 25 Apr 2004
Reviews: 4
Location: Florida
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Fri Jul 09, 2004 6:35 am
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| I started reading this story 4 days ago...and I must say I have never had a story grab hold of me like this one. I think I have burned my eyes from reading from my monitor!! Excellent story.... I do hope you update soon....real soon.....really really soon.....and thank you thank you thank you thank you..... |
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Ania
Joined: 08 Sep 2003
Reviews: 55
Location: Britain
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Sat Jul 10, 2004 8:53 am
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| I might have said this before, but the brilliant thing about this fic is the development of Elanor and Haldir's relationship, it is so convincing, as well as that of the other characters, Galadriel is brought to life in a way that does her full justice, not completely terrifying and yet with that subtle power. I've found this fic an absolute joy to read and is superbly written. Well done (again). |
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