Reviews for "Elanor's Revenge"

Sat Nov 27, 2004 12:28 pm

*cheers* A great chapter, with wonderful, sweet interaction between Elanor and Haldir, and all these little hints as to what will soon come to pass are driving me crazy! [but in a good way ^__^]

Also, it was very satisfying to see Lurien get his. Twisted Evil smiley face

Thanks for an entertaining chapter, can't wait for the next one.

Sat Nov 27, 2004 6:25 pm

What a great chapter! I'm absolutely in love with these characters. I really want everything to turn out well for ALL of them.

Haldir's and Elanor's developing relationship is so wonderful. The gentleness and protectiveness of Haldir is so romantic. And Elanor's quiet, shyness is so sweet. It's very enjoyable reading about the intamacy of their relationship. The fact that Haldir has taken the steps of actually creating a bond with Elanor, is a huge step for him, and I'm anxious to see what further steps he will take to lay claim to Elanor. Haldir's doubts, and worries about Elanor leaving were very realistic and heartwarming. I can't wait to find out what happens once Elrond arrives in Lorien.

Not only have you two created a wonderful relationship between Haldir and Elanor; you two have also created wonderful supporting characters as well. Rumil, Orophin, Lurien, Tarwe, Doria, Ture, Healea, and Nerwen...all of these characters are so wonderful. Their storylines are extremely developed and complex, and as a reader, I care just as much about these characters as I do Haldir and Elanor.

You two are doing an superb job on this story, and I can't wait for the next update...
Keep up the good work... Smile smiley face

Michelle... Very Happy smiley face

Sun Nov 28, 2004 1:09 pm

Yeah! An update! Which i'm very happy to see, and I'm even more happier that there will be more updates and quicker than

The situation between Nerwen and Rumil is really sad, I can't wait to see how it will be resolved and how he'll react to the carving that she's going to make. Poor elf he sounds so miserable, they both need some happiness.

I'm not liking Lurien right now, I want to give him a smack or have Tarwe smack some sense into him, one of the two, I haven't exactly decided which yet. Tarwe would probably make more sense though.

Anyways, good job, I can't wait to read the next update, whenever it may come (anyway we can get one before Christmas?)

Fri Dec 03, 2004 1:03 am

What a delight, to come home from a short weekend vacation and find an update! What a wonderful chapter!! I really like the heart jewel....almost made me cry! Just when I think you girls cannot get any better....you do!! Love it. Thanks.

Fri Dec 03, 2004 9:39 pm

Great job ladies! I am still holding out for Rumil, I love that elf. Wink smiley face

The heart jewel was beautiful, this really was a very romantic and symbolic gesture and I am really glad to see this physical token of Haldir's affection. It is one thing to think it, but another to declare it with words or a physical symbol such as a ring in our culture ... or a beloved heirloom in Haldir's world.

Okay, my last prayer to your bunnies/muses is that Lurien redeem himself quick! I just want to hug Tarwe... and bonk Lurien on the head with a troll's club. Okay, maybe not that severe... a nerf bat - yes, as I do hold out hope for him and I know he will find his honor under all that hurt that swirls around him and is now threatening to boil over again! Very Happy smiley face

I have been keeping up with your story and I am so glad you updated. Lovely! Now... the Lord of Imladris is arriving... the stakes are raised! Come on Haldir!! Get that elleth and don't let her go!!

Sat Dec 04, 2004 1:42 am

What they have between them is so sweetly written....sigh....

Things will be getting more interesting isn't it...with so many things/people that need settling.

Sun Dec 05, 2004 8:42 pm

This was a great chapter! Wow more please! Lurk smiley face

Fri Dec 10, 2004 5:46 am

I started reading this story when you first started posting it..i absolutely loved yet...then I became lax in my reading...I started reading it again, from the beginning, and have gotten to chap 20...I still love this story......cant wait to read the rest...Pat

Tue Dec 28, 2004 6:48 am

I've been reading this story since i found it by accident, and have loved it ever since. Haldir is one of my favourite elves Surprised smiley face

ops: I love his jokes and the way they are at ease with each other. Please keep on writting, I'm very curious about the rest. Pllllleeeeeaaaaassseeee Wink smiley face

Sun Jan 16, 2005 4:35 pm

I love this fic.... Haldir is sooo how I pictured him!!! And their relationship is so lovely! You must write more (preferably sooner than later). Thanks so much!!! Very Happy smiley face

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