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Eowadia
Joined: 06 Feb 2004 Reviews: 1
Location: West Midlands, UK
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Sat Feb 07, 2004 11:57 am
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I can't believe no one's reviewed this! Is it up at FF.Net? This is really good; I've only read up to Chapter 4 so far but I'll definately read the rest... this is great! |
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ilistine

Joined: 27 Sep 2003 Reviews: 137
Location: In the cottage nextdoor to Imedhuir Hamgeredis
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Sun Feb 08, 2004 5:25 am
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| What a cute story. I am really enjoying it. You have captured everyone's point of view and done a great job showing how everyone feels. I sure hope there is going to be some more "romantic moments". Anyway, I really like this story, can't wait for the email update. Ilisitne |
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ellisk

Joined: 24 Jan 2004 Reviews: 310
Location: Icon by Alassante! Wow!
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Sun Feb 08, 2004 9:00 am
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| This is an outstanding story. The dialogue is sharp. I love it. can't wait for more. |
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ilistine

Joined: 27 Sep 2003 Reviews: 137
Location: In the cottage nextdoor to Imedhuir Hamgeredis
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Mon Mar 01, 2004 9:34 pm
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This story is still very cute and the latest chapter had more of Rumil, my bouncing elf. Go Rumil! I like it because it is light and silly and a definate "Tangled Web".
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004 Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
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Sat Mar 13, 2004 1:38 pm
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| Really great and captivating! That's quite a mess you've spun.... now to see how it develops and ends... this has got to be good *rubs hands together and smiles evily* well.... hope you post more soon! It's really wonderful! |
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Scarlett
Joined: 15 Mar 2004 Reviews: 6
Location: Charleston, SC
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Mon Mar 15, 2004 5:05 pm
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I've been following this story for some time now, it's one of my absolute favorites. I love your OFC's- especially Indelin, poor thing. You've crafted a wickedly brilliant story, I can't wait for the rest!!!!!!
Riveted,
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004 Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
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Wed Mar 17, 2004 1:13 pm
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| I love it! I've been waiting FOREVER for chapter 23! it's great! Wonderful! This is a really wonderful web you're spinning, and two might end up disappointed - 4 girls, 6 guys! Oh well, you're so good that it's so unexpected, so who knows? Anyway, this thing with Elhoir "being" Elladan is really neat and well thought out! Also, I love Indelin, she's my favorite, though you really feel so sorry for her - she's really naive and believes everything! Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
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kinvara
Joined: 18 Feb 2004 Reviews: 58
Location: middle of nowhere, dorset
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Fri Mar 19, 2004 11:46 am
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Aaarrrhhh! I forgot to review, i'm so sorry. I constantly forget to because i'm reading then i have to go some where else and don't have a chance to review. So what do i think of this story? i think its brillant with a very good sense of humour, an orginal story line and i have to say i think all the charaters of the characters are brilliant and funny. Some of the situations they get into are brillant! Keep writing please!  |
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004 Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
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Sat Mar 20, 2004 9:46 am
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Chapter 24 - it's great! I've been waiting for what seems decades, but it's really worth it. Poor Estel and Elladan! This web is really tangled, but how will it be untangled? This is so exciting and I can't wait for more!  |
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004 Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
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Tue Mar 23, 2004 10:50 am
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Just reread the whole thing *giggles* cause I can't wait for more!  |
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