Reviews for "A Tangled Web"

Thu Mar 25, 2004 1:20 pm

Oh gosh! This is such a tangled web... and I'm dying for more........... Please? Wink smiley face

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Sat Mar 27, 2004 11:51 pm

You never fail to astonish me with your words and wit! I love the direction I can finally see this taking... maybe? Bravo! You are awesome Very Happy smiley face

Sun Mar 28, 2004 4:16 am

A really great chapter! But I feel so sorry for Haldir................ Anyway, I wonder why Meril feels the way she does........ Also, the scene where Indelin left Elladan! A true friend! *laughs* Well, it's a great story, and I'm impatiently waiting for more! Wink smiley face

Sun Mar 28, 2004 1:29 pm

Indelin and Elladan are now officially my favorite non-couple... Excellent chapter, as usual. I can't wait for more!

Scarlett

Tue Mar 30, 2004 11:16 pm

I am supposed to be sleeping, but I couldn't (its not Sunday). So, I re-read ATW... again. I wanted to comment that I am really enjoying the character arcs. Deeper emotions that make certain characters tick is being revealed in such subtle (and some obvious) ways and they are changing before my eyes when I read from chpt 1-25 in one sitting. I know, I need to get a life. But, I needed something funny and witty and sweet, and this is it. It is a remarkable talent you have. Very Happy smiley face

Love every word.

Tue Mar 30, 2004 11:55 pm

Monaleoht and Nicari, I really really REALLY appreciate that you review ever chapter... multiple times... but there's no way in the world the finish work is going to live up to this kind of adoration. I'm only saying it because I don't want you to be dissapointed and then chase me down with pitchforkes and torches.... Scary smiley face

I'm so glad everyone is having a good laugh and, for the record, Indelin is my baby and I'm just tickled everyone loves her. OC's are a nightmare, no mater how well you think out the characters they just don't have the weight behind them that canon characters do.

I'd been posting updates every Saturday and, well, I was late. (hey RL bites Bad computer day smiley face

) and I guess some people got a little distressed.

I know it confused me too wtf smiley face

So just a note... all updates will take place here *first* and should happen some time every Sat or Sun.

Thanks so much for all the great feedback, you guys are the best!

~Nienna~
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Wed Mar 31, 2004 9:56 am

You would NEVER dissapoint me! I've just reread the whole thing...... and it's even better than all the other hundreds of times I've read it before Wink smiley face

. I'm begging you to post on Saturday this week... cause Í leave on Sunday for ten days... (the torture! I won't be here for the other post... *gasps.... faints*) Well, it'll be waiting when I come back... that's a comfort... NOT! Oh dear! What am I gonna do?!? Wink smiley face

Anyway, I just reread the last chapter.. again and it's so great! Wink smiley face

*sighs* I wonder how it'll end up....... I have an idea, but then, you're so decieveing and misleading..... Wink smiley face

that I give up and I'll just read Exclamation smiley face

By the way, ..... Erestor and Indelin? .... I mean... is he really her ...type? He seems so serious...? Also, can't wait to see how Elladan is gonnna get out of this one! *laughs* Very Happy smiley face

PS - I know you only post every Sat / Sun and that I "watch" this story.... *grins sheepishly* but I check everyday......
PPS - WHY IS EVERY WEEK SO LONG SINCE Í'VE DISCOVERED THIS STORY?!? Very Happy smiley face

Fri Apr 02, 2004 11:25 pm

Nienna dearest, you could never disappoint, and to repeat myself from the past for my own ears, if you never post another word, this is a masterpiece in my eyes! Very Happy smiley face

But I think Monaleoht and I would cry like babies.... hehe, no pitchforks involved.

Indelin is a doll. Elladan is awful perceptive and complementary of her. Wake up, elf!! hehe.

Looking forward to the next installment when you post Cool smiley face

(shakes head at the delightful chaos of this "Web" *snort*)

Sat Apr 03, 2004 12:46 am

OHH!! I am laughing so hard!! Very Happy smiley face

The twins had this coming and it was done to perfection! Very Happy smiley face

Arwen and Aragorn's scene was lovely. It is so sweet and charming how he makes a fool of himself for her. *sigh*

I never tire of reading about Galadriel and Celeborn, frisky couple that they are! She is so wise and he is soooo yummy!

I KNEW Haldir was watching Aragorn and Arwen... my heart broke for him!!! Nienna, save him from fading... poor elf!!!

Indelin, a healer. She is a wonderful character and I am glad to see this side of her. I am not certain if I want to hug Orophin or thump him on his head! Ignorance suffocates love. I swooned at Indelin's memory of Erestor calling her "my lady". Oh, what a dear elf he is.

BRAVO...... AGAIN!!! Very Happy smiley face

Going back to re-read it...

Sat Apr 03, 2004 10:37 am

SO FUNNY! Thank you so much! You've made my week! Very Happy smiley face

The scene at the clearing with Arwen and Aragorn was so... sweet! I loved the phrase "pure adoration on his face" or however you put it! But don't let Haldir fade.... let him loosen up! It's not fair....... Sad smiley face

! Also, about Meril and Orophin...... he won't give up easily will he??? *worried look* I'm still wondering about Meril... what makes her think the way she does about binding...? Anyway, Galadriel and Celeborn are so cute! And so childish, in a good way, together! They're so fun and... hopelessy in love! Yay! Very Happy smiley face

I can't wait for the next part... perhaps we'll here about Erestor and Elladan's *cough* conversation? bol..... I liked how Erestor is nice... but he's a little *cough* old no? Wink smiley face

Anyway, I'm not certain anymore if Orophin still feels so strongly about Meril... I mean, that scene when Indelin was healing... or maybe he does... there were a lot of well thought-out contradictions! Wink smiley face

But does Indelin still have feelings for Orophin... I mean, she wasn't exactly..... *cough* pleasant with him! Anyway, it was better than all of the other chapters... though the quality improves every chapter no? Very Happy smiley face

I can't wait! Especially for Erestor and Elladan to have their .... talk? If you could call it that! bol....

Anyway, have to go... read it again! Very Happy smiley face

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