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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004 Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
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Sat Apr 03, 2004 10:44 am
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WAIT! I've just noticed that Elladan was with Elrohir.... which means you haven't put in the conversation!?! You've got to add it... or put it as a backflash or something.... or Indelin asks... whatever! I'm so curious!?!  |
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Scarlett
Joined: 15 Mar 2004 Reviews: 6
Location: Charleston, SC
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Sat Apr 03, 2004 12:52 pm
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I've been dying for this chapter to come out, and it was definitely worth the wait! I felt so badly for Haldir...and i loved the interplay between Galadriel and Celeborn. And I agree, it was very devilish of you to leave us in the dark about Erestor's 'conversation' with Elladan. Can't wait for more!!
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Anieni
Joined: 27 Jan 2004 Reviews: 48
Location: Somewhere between fantasy and reality
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Tue Apr 06, 2004 11:10 pm
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This is a wonderful story, as usual I can only admire everything you write. Now that I have had a chance to read the whole thing I am caught and will wait anxiously for future updates.
Keep up the wonderful work!!
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aimless

Joined: 05 Feb 2004 Reviews: 36
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Wed Apr 07, 2004 9:09 am
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Wonderful start Nienna. I see much mayhem ahead and I do not even have a magical mirror to gaze into. Nicari was right this is going to be fun. Can I be a fan too, do we get T-shirts? Can I have an autograph? Heh. I will review again when I've read some more. now on to chapter 2. Whee!!
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aimless

Joined: 05 Feb 2004 Reviews: 36
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Wed Apr 07, 2004 3:49 pm
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Chapter 8
Ok Haldir needs to be hit upside the head with a blunt object, maybe that would knock some sense into him. Elladan, Elrohir, Rumul and Orophan plotting together? The opportunities for disaster are too numerous to count. Will anyone end up with who they wish to be with? I will just have to stay tuned.
Number 2 Fan in the Nienna Fan Club. (If I promise not to be annoying do you promise not to get a restraining order? Heh.)
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kinvara
Joined: 18 Feb 2004 Reviews: 58
Location: middle of nowhere, dorset
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Thu Apr 08, 2004 1:18 pm
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| I thought the last couple of chapters were brilliant and the last chapter was very amusing especially the prank on the twinjs. Keep going with this i think it is a brilliant story so far. Good luck |
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aimless

Joined: 05 Feb 2004 Reviews: 36
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Fri Apr 09, 2004 4:58 pm
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Chapter 18. Good grief it is getting complicated. I almost lost track of who was chasing whom. I hope Haldir finds someone, the poor guy. I love your version of Glorfindel...I hope that he finds someone as well. Giggle....Celeborn and Galadriel...will they ever have a successful tryst? Or are they doomed to frustration. Keep on updating dear...for I will soon be to the end of the posted chapters. I will join Nicari in adoringly sitting on your doorstep waiting the next chapter.
Your number 2 fan
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Nicari
Joined: 22 Feb 2004 Reviews: 19
Location: Imladris... running around trying to pick up pieces
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Sat Apr 10, 2004 12:17 am
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WOW! Where do I start? So much depth and angst and history and plotting!!! Haldir - I think his brothers' days are numbered for this tactic... they are in for it!! hehe! I sure wouldn't mess with this elf! Elrond/Aragorn - this was so insightful and I have always wondered why Elrond didn't just push Isildur over the edge and be done with it... this was very moving... I have always wondered what his take would be. Meril... oh to be wooed like this! I would be Orophin's forever! Indelin & Erestor... Erestor is so clever... *snort, smirk, giggle* I just love that elf's mind! (Nicari puts him back on his pedestal). Elladan and Elrohir... could this get ANYMORE TANGLED??? Did I forget anyone? I have to go read it again.. I was floored when I got to the end... I wanted it to continue!!! This is awesome!!! Okay, reading it again now..... BRAVO, BRAVO!!!  |
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Nicari
Joined: 22 Feb 2004 Reviews: 19
Location: Imladris... running around trying to pick up pieces
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Sat Apr 10, 2004 12:45 am
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Oh, yes... How could I forget.... Erestor's nod to Elladan treating Indelin's honor so carefully.... *sigh*
Orophin realizing his brother can speak dwarvish curses!!
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004 Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
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Thu Apr 15, 2004 7:18 am
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OH MY GOD! I'm finally home...got to go read! *pants* so happy!  |
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