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BittenBuggy

Joined: 27 Dec 2003
Reviews: 93
Location: Busy Being the Queen Of Everything.. And Trying to Catch the Yoda-Copter
Mon Feb 09, 2004 8:34 pm
Wow...I like it...a lot. Very beautifully written, flows wonderfully.
 
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003
Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
Tue Feb 10, 2004 2:46 am
It's lovely, but sounds kinda incomplete. Or is it just me wishing that you've actually written it longer? ^_~
 
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SilverMoonLady

Joined: 14 Jul 2003
Reviews: 251
Location: Breaking in a Brandybuck... *wicked grin*
Wed Feb 11, 2004 7:13 pm
Lovely! Poor hobbits! Will be hunting for more of your stuff nowSmile smiley face
 
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saborice
Joined: 11 Jun 2004
Reviews: 33
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Sun Jun 27, 2004 12:02 am
Wow Very Happy smiley face
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Mon Nov 08, 2004 4:55 pm
Very good imagery. It tells a lot of the emotional turmoil experienced after Gandalf's fall. But, again, I find the meter is off. It varies from one stanza to the next. It may just be me, but I feel like I have stumbled. Kinda like not seeing a step in front of you, and trying to catch yourself. Still, a nice poem. Thank you for sharing.
 
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