Reviews for "The Elf in the Corner"

Sat Jun 07, 2003 12:54 am

oh how sad. i love the dialogue between lera and her mother. how her mother kept the gold for her and hated to spend the one piece. you are going to hate me but i hope you will be following up on this one. lera looking for her father, her family. beautiful. simply beautiful

Sat Jun 07, 2003 7:35 pm

Ooh, elf smut, my favorite! And how wonderful to see Elrond getting some attention. He's way too serious for an elf, methinks. Now if someone would do a good little smut fic about Thranduil, hint hint, LOL.

Wed Jun 11, 2003 9:33 am

I liked this better than Use Me Once. The plausibility factor was greater. Smile smiley face

The inevitable production of a child is a bit overdone, but the scene between mother and daughter was touching. And I like the idea of a sensual Elrond. He's way too stern in most fics. This new grading system doesn't reconcile well with the old star system. It was worth reading, but not only 2 stars.

Oh, I think I caught an omission -- very minor. "he taught me how to take his member in mouth" -- Is "my" missing?

Sun Nov 02, 2003 2:03 am

I liked your attention to detail--the time you put into creating the setting of the inn and the characterization of the woman. Most of all, I loved the idea of my all-time favorite elf finally getting some action! Please--let's see more of this charmingly seductive Elrond!

Wed Dec 10, 2003 10:14 pm

This is most lovely. One does not find much fabulous Elrond het and this just goes to show it can be done. Razz smiley face

I see there are many ficlets titled "MisAdventures." I assume they go with Empty Vessel. Is there any way to tell where they go?

I am looking forward to perusing yours (and this) library.

Leeanne

Thu Feb 26, 2004 12:25 am

This is one of the very few human-elf het stories that works well. The best detail, for me, was John warning her to be careful of the Elf--the sort of thing that must have happened all the time, yet authors consistently ignore it. Well done!

Thu Feb 26, 2004 1:47 am

*cough* *blushes*

Well... I liked it. Enough said.

Sun Mar 07, 2004 6:46 am

I liked it... and I hope that you continue with Lera trying to find her real father... It was well written and the dialogue between mother and daughter moved me to tears Surprised smiley face

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Wed Jun 21, 2006 2:38 am

Love this story...of course, it helps that Elrond is my fav Elf...and I agree with the above comment...I hope you do continue it with her searching for her real father... Smile smiley face

Tue Dec 19, 2006 6:07 pm

I enjoyed reading this story as much as I have the others you've written. I've never thought of Elrond as being a particularly erotic being. I DO see him in new eyes now ...

The only thing about it... Even as much as I enjoyed it... I could not see a mother being that descriptive to her daughter.

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