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BittenBuggy

Joined: 27 Dec 2003
Reviews: 93
Location: Busy Being the Queen Of Everything.. And Trying to Catch the Yoda-Copter
Tue Feb 10, 2004 7:31 pm
*Lots of tears* I think a lot about what it must have been like for Legolas to leave. He knew that eventually he would be the only member of the Fellowship left...Just image what that must feel like. You have capture his emotions perfectly. *More tears* Just absolutly, totally beautiful. Thank you.... Bawl smiley face
 
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HollyTook

Joined: 24 Jan 2004
Reviews: 36
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Wed Feb 11, 2004 6:57 pm
Lovely message and unique points. However, I can't give this my top rating because of the inconsistent rhythm, awkward lines, and the appearence that you just haven't mastered the language yet. However, you are on your way to becoming a great writer, so don't stop!
 
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003
Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
Fri Feb 13, 2004 9:18 am
Just asking... do you see again as rhymes with "gen" or "gain"?
It does rhyme with bane, right?
I used the former pronounciation. (however you spell it...lol)
 

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MegW7
Joined: 30 Sep 2009
Reviews: 28
Location: West of the Moon
Tue Sep 14, 2010 6:49 am
Beautiful! You have captured Legolas' feelings in such a nostalgic way. There is no anger, no regret, just an acceptance of what must be. I especially loved the line "with Gimli still yet barely so".
 
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