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BittenBuggy

Joined: 27 Dec 2003
Reviews: 93
Location: Busy Being the Queen Of Everything.. And Trying to Catch the Yoda-Copter
Thu Feb 12, 2004 6:31 pm
Oh WOW. I am very impressed. Perfectly captured Frodo's emotions and really made the reader feel for him and his burden. You are an amazing poet, I love all your stuff.
 
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HollyTook

Joined: 24 Jan 2004
Reviews: 36
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Thu Feb 12, 2004 6:41 pm
Oh my gosh! thank you! I just posted that two seconds ago after just finishing the poem, hehe.
 
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003
Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
Thu Feb 12, 2004 9:08 pm
I second that!! It's lovely... ^_^

Your style is kinda diff than I'm used to though...

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Hrrmmm... never occured to me actually...
 
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HollyTook

Joined: 24 Jan 2004
Reviews: 36
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Thu Feb 12, 2004 10:01 pm
oh, ABCB is my trademark rhyme scheme, though it's fun for me to deviate. If anything, this rhythm is different from my normal style. Usually I write in a 3-4-3-4 iambic pattern, but with this one it's roughly 3-3-3.5-3, all iambic except for the first syllable of the first line. I wasn't too consistent, though, cause it's a new style for me.
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Wed May 24, 2006 1:01 pm
Nice imagery, but I feel the meter is off; it makes it hard to stay in rhythm. Thank you for sharing.
 
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