Reviews for "Of Gold and Wood"

Sat Feb 14, 2004 8:25 am

Cannot believe I haven't reviewed this piece before. My humblest apologies. I think I saw this one at HASA before, not quite certain. Anyway, I have to take off my hypothetical hat to you- it's bloody near perfect.
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I particularly enjoyed the way the characters behaved. It shows they are not made of ice, and that they do have passion and desire like everything else under god's sun, and the restrain and gentleness of their actions mesmerized me. I also loved the way you brought to life a little known character, and I am utterly infatuated by the Noldorin prince. (Lack of personal life, I know.... damn those elves Cool smiley face

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I should also congratulate you on making a Silm fic that is understandable for people who did not actually read the Silmarillion. The problem (If the Silm lovers will forgive me saying that) is that there are so many characters and plots and actions and stuff that one may get lost in the book. The fic brought those characters closer without falling in the trap of too much details or complexity. It is very simple- and trust me, simple *is* good. It's bloody fantastic, actually.

The message is carried on with grace, depth, and simplicity. the characters are believable. The plot is credible- it reminds me oh so much of things like first love, first kiss... Heart smiley face

In short- A wonderful story. Congratulations. whether you carry the series on or not (which I hope you do Very Happy smiley face

) this piece can stand alone, because it's so awfully great.

Sat Feb 14, 2004 4:34 pm

Elentari said
> Cannot believe I haven't reviewed this piece before. My humblest apologies. I think I saw this one at HASA before, not quite certain. Anyway, I have to take off my hypothetical hat to you- it's bloody near perfect.

You probably have, it's in HASA public archive as well. *blushes at hat being taken off* Thank you!

>I particularly enjoyed the way the characters behaved. It shows they are not made of ice, and that they do have passion and desire like everything else under god's sun, and the restrain and gentleness of their actions mesmerized me. I also loved the way you brought to life a little known character, and I am utterly infatuated by the Noldorin prince. (Lack of personal life, I know.... damn those elves)

I think Elven lords are the projection of how women want men to behave. That's why they are so utterly and disgustingly perfect Wink smiley face

Though I think Elves are far from perfect, they are just distant.

>I should also congratulate you on making a Silm fic that is understandable for people who did not actually read the Silmarillion. The problem (If the Silm lovers will forgive me saying that) is that there are so many characters and plots and actions and stuff that one may get lost in the book. The fic brought those characters closer without falling in the trap of too much details or complexity. It is very simple- and trust me, simple *is* good.

I hadn't counted on this. It's indeed a good thing if people who haven't read the Silm are appreciating and understanding my story. You're right, sometimes it's hard to keep track of everything happening in the book.

>It's bloody fantastic, actually.
The message is carried on with grace, depth, and simplicity. the characters are believable. The plot is credible- it reminds me oh so much of things like first love, first kiss... Heart smiley face

>In short- A wonderful story. Congratulations. whether you carry the series on or not (which I hope you do Very Happy smiley face

) this piece can stand alone, because it's so awfully great.

The series will continue, even if I'm awfully slow at writing, for several reasons. I began the second part a few days ago, so stay tuned. Thank you again!

Sun Feb 15, 2004 7:25 pm

What a beautiful story that captures the tenderness between two individuals in love. Your story has definitely given me the desire to pick up the Silmarillion once again and refresh my memory. I am glad to know that you will be continuing this series. Very Happy smiley face

Mon Feb 16, 2004 4:26 pm

sindohte said
> What a beautiful story that captures the tenderness between two individuals in love. Your story has definitely given me the desire to pick up the Silmarillion once again and refresh my memory. I am glad to know that you will be continuing this series. Very Happy smiley face

Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it Very Happy smiley face

Mon Sep 13, 2004 4:11 pm

Your writing style does flow with the beauty and grace befitting the time and place. The only line I saw that I felt jarred a little was "she was lucky to have Finrod". May I suggest something more like "she felt blessed to have found Finrod" or have been blessed by his attentions or something other than "lucky", it seems too - modern. Having started the Sil again, second time around, hoping to get the details straighter this time, I so appreciate a fan fic author that can bring to life characters that Tolkien didn't "paint" for us. I really felt like I was there. Yep, Finrod knows how to treat a lady! Thanks for a lovely read, looking forward to your next work.

Tue Sep 28, 2004 3:45 pm

Thanks Yavanie, I loved reading your message. Unfortunately you won't see anything more from me in this fandom, I left it permanently... sorry! I'm sure you'll find other great stories around
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Sat Nov 20, 2004 2:36 pm

[How have I never reviewed this story before? Well, happily, the MEFAs were a good excuse for me to finally translate my thoughts into words. What a lovely story. The following was my review in the MEFA voting for this story.] "This story is so bright it's painful to read. The love between Finrod and Amarie grows brilliant and perfect and unbearably sweet, leaving only a tremendous question at the end: How could he possibly leave her, after all that? Argh! "

Mon Nov 22, 2004 9:52 am

Thanks Viv Smile smiley face

Wed Feb 02, 2005 3:05 am

Lovely and Elegant. Smile smiley face

Tue Feb 08, 2005 4:53 pm

Thanks Vi

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