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Elentari

Joined: 13 May 2003
Reviews: 244
Location: Lost in elven dreams...
Sun Feb 15, 2004 9:23 am

I read this before on HASA and absolutely loved it. It's very good (except perhaps that I, being a romance-addict, should have liked to see the wedding. The fic kind of jumps from courtship from marriage life. It's still incredible, though)
But if you forgive me, I shall make one humble suggestion.... Surprised smiley faceops: I'm not very comfortable with it, but hell.

meldaya: (Quenya) my love // Meldaya, pitya nénuya: (Quenya) My love, my little lily
The Quenya sufix for 'my' is 'nya', not 'ya'. Ya does not really clarify who owns what. so it should actually read:
Meldanya// Meldanya, Pitya Nénunya.

that was it. Great work Very Happy smiley face
 
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ViJanaway

Joined: 07 May 2004
Reviews: 78
Location: Near Dallas, Texas
Wed Feb 09, 2005 4:24 pm

This is so beautiful...It is just right.
thank you
 
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miriel361
Joined: 11 Jun 2003
Reviews: 103
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Wed Feb 09, 2005 4:52 pm

What a lovely story. I cannot believe it has been hidden away here for so long. You have captured the perfect essence of fading and their manner of speech was fitting. Well done.
 
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Texasgirl

Joined: 18 Oct 2004
Reviews: 112
Location: Texas (no shit, sherlock)
Wed Mar 09, 2005 8:46 pm

a little confusing at first as to whether it was lindir or glorfindel courting her, but very nicely written.
 
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greywing

Joined: 28 Dec 2006
Reviews: 5
Location: The Havens
Wed Apr 18, 2007 1:35 pm

I think I need a hanky.
 
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Elfique

Joined: 13 Feb 2010
Reviews: 11
Location: Londonia
Tue Feb 16, 2010 4:35 pm

Oh my gosh! I remember reading this years ago on ff.net and absolutely loving it - what a nice surprise it was to find it here and reread it again after so long!
 
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GloryBeeDeb
Joined: 18 Nov 2011
Reviews: 19
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Wed Nov 30, 2011 2:50 pm

That was absolutely beautiful and I would love to see at least one more chapter Smile smiley face It is just about impossible to find a het Lindir romance so I am happy I stumbled upon this one.
 
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