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Leilana
Joined: 19 Jan 2004
Reviews: 56
Location: 
Thu Feb 19, 2004 8:04 pm
i don't understand why there aren't any reviews yet. Its pretty good so far, I like that she keeps nearly giving herself away... Shocked smiley face
 
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Novedhelion

Joined: 04 Sep 2003
Reviews: 42
Location: NC
Fri Feb 20, 2004 11:00 am
Poor Eolindë...knowing where Faramir ends up I hate to think her girlish heart will be broken...but she seems strong spirited enough to handle it. Keep up the good work - I like that this story is told in first person. That is hard to write and do it well, which you have done in spades. Can't wait to read the next part!
 
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wiz
Joined: 22 Jan 2004
Reviews: 6
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Sat Feb 21, 2004 11:35 am
I really like seeing a different side of the LOTR story. You've done a great job and I look forward to more.
 
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003
Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
Fri Feb 27, 2004 3:39 am
Good job. I'm anticipated for more!
 
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
Sat Mar 06, 2004 3:10 pm
GREAT! Please keep going. There are a few typos that you may want to look at, but very few (I do a lot of proof-reading... that kind of thing can't escape, so don't worry, they're very slight). I wonder what happens next, and I love this point of view! Please keep writing!
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Estelina

Joined: 21 Jan 2004
Reviews: 7
Location: Germany
Sat Mar 20, 2004 7:02 am
I've been priveleged to read a bit more of this story, and believe me, you will LOVE where she takes it!

Without giving anything away, we experience battle from within Minas Tirith in a deep and personal way.

Saelind's writing really makes me feel like I'm living and breathing in Middle-eath - the mark of really good fantasy.

Thank you, Saelind! Can't wait to see how it all wraps up Exclamation smiley face
 
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Novedhelion

Joined: 04 Sep 2003
Reviews: 42
Location: NC
Sun Apr 18, 2004 6:13 pm
An update! Woo-hoo! Poor Eolindë....what is it with brothers and bad timing? Big Hug smiley face

Love the bit about the stinky ointment... Laughing smiley face Looking forward to more!!!
 
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Aibrean

Joined: 29 Mar 2004
Reviews: 2
Location: Across the Sea
Fri Apr 23, 2004 2:00 pm
Lovely story with lots of atmosphere! You've done a super job at first person too. Definitely keep it coming!
 
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Radbooks

Joined: 29 Apr 2004
Reviews: 66
Location: Washington State
Fri May 28, 2004 11:52 pm
I really enjoyed reading this story this evening! I always enjoy a well written original charaters - especially female ones. Faramir is also one of my favorite LOTR characters so it's a great combination! Smile smiley face I'm looking forward to see where you take this story and these characters. Great job!

RADbooks
 
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Leilana
Joined: 19 Jan 2004
Reviews: 56
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Wed Jul 28, 2004 4:54 pm
Where is the rest? Please, please update soon...! Wink smiley face
 
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