Reviews for "The Empty Vessel"

Sat Jun 07, 2003 12:54 am

for gods sake girl! dont leave us hanging! more! more! now!

Sat Jun 07, 2003 12:54 am

You know, I'll be totally honest with you, I didn't like this story at first. I'm generally not too fond of stories that stick an original character in among the Fellowship who saves the day. So I started reading with some trepidation. Then I realized it was going to be a "girl disguised as a boy" story too, and then I really wasn't sure if I was going to like it. But then something happened. The chapter ended, and I wanted to know what was going to happen NEXT. And even though I usually think of the "girl disguised as a boy" conceit as cheesy, you handled it so very well that I forgot that I don't like that kind of story. Smile smiley face

You posted the second chapter, and I read it hungrily, and realized that hey, I DO like this story, and I would be remiss if I didn't leave you a review letting you know that. Instead of writing "just another" anything, you took a couple of cliches and made them original, and more importantly, you made them work. I like that she's a little older. I like that she's had children. I love the characterization of Haldir that you've done here.

So I guess in summary, I wanted to let you know that I really like what you're doing here, and can't wait to read more. So write faster!

Sat Jun 07, 2003 12:54 am

I am re-reading this and enjoying it as much the second time as I did the first. Please hurry with the update!

Sat Jun 07, 2003 2:26 pm

This is a great story so far and has really captured my interest! I love the fact that Haldir is the main character for a change and like the development of his character. I'm intrigued to find out how this modern woman showed up in Middle Earth and am interested in hearing her story of sadness.
Keep up the good work!

Sun Jun 08, 2003 6:12 am

I am greatly enjoying this story - it has a nice blend of canon and original plot and character motivation. Bronwyn is engagingly modern but you have placed her well in the story. Haldir and Legolas are especially well written and share an interesting dynamic. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Fri Jun 13, 2003 9:10 pm

hope to see more chapters up really soon!

Mon Jun 16, 2003 2:36 pm

Good God, girl - if these 2 don't get together soon, they will combust! Thouroughly enjoying this and the great twist in this last chapter about her destiny. Hurry, hurry, give them ( and us!) some release soon!

Tue Jun 17, 2003 10:32 am

omg - please let him find her and not spank her too terribly bad! haha. she is so hardheaded but i dont blame her. this is possible one of the best fics i have ever read. its awesome! please post soon.
michelle

Thu Jun 19, 2003 10:01 am

Thank God for the long awaited event - great, edgy elf smut. Who knew Haldir had a little kink in him???
Keep going, girl - this is a great story!

Sat Jun 28, 2003 2:45 pm

omg! nooooooo! she cant die! no! its a bad dream, right? especially now that she realizes he really loves her? please update!

i tried to vote (5 stars - this is the best fic i have ever read) but it wont let me!

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