Reviews for "Like Sand In My Hand"

Sun Feb 22, 2004 2:49 am

Lovely POV from Eowyn at a crucial moment in ROTK. YOu have a nice grasp of imagery and motivation. I did notice a few grammatical errors here and there, which were a bit distracting, but that would be my only quibble Smile smiley face

Well Done!

Tue Feb 24, 2004 7:45 am

I will echo the previous review - I love fic like this, when an author finds a little open window and by her words shines a light in for the rest of us to see something otherwise hidden but, please, find a beta and get those little niggly errors fixed. Most distracting.

Tue Feb 24, 2004 12:54 pm

Thanks to both of you ! I apologize for these distracting errors... Confused smiley face

I indeed was beta-readed but maybe my beta wasn't attentive enough... So if anyone is interested by beta-reading my stories, just email me ! I will be sooooo glad Smile smiley face

E-angel.

Tue Feb 24, 2004 6:23 pm

I really enjoyed this as I thought it really captured Éowyn's feelings at that particular moment without making her seem overly emotional or hysterical (which many writers do, which really annoys me - she is supposed to be "as stern as steel" after all) Well done

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