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SamwiseTheStrong
Joined: 27 Feb 2004
Reviews: 52
Location: Oregon, USA
Fri Feb 27, 2004 4:26 pm
Very cute little poem. I very much enjoyed it.
SamwiseTheStrong
 
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HollyTook

Joined: 24 Jan 2004
Reviews: 36
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Wed Mar 17, 2004 1:16 pm
You have a great idea and were on the verge of getting your imagery, but this needs some serious grammatical work. I'm probably sounding like a broken record right now, and don't think I don't give poetic license, but this requires translation! Watch out for your apostrophes [in poetry, puncuation is not always a mandate, but apostrophes change the meaning of words, so they are needed if you want to make sense], your prepositions, and your verb agreements.

~*Holly Took*~
 
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