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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Thu Oct 22, 2009 8:24 am
The concept is interesting, but I cannot read it. You need to separate your paragraphs. It is overwhelming to even consider reading this after looking at it.

I would like to revisit it, but only if you do some editing.

Hmmm, seems after reading your bio that you jumped on, joined and published on one day and have not been back. Since you probably will never see this, I guess a review is kind of moot.
 

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Last edited by Rous on Thu Oct 22, 2009 8:28 am
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