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BittenBuggy

Joined: 27 Dec 2003
Reviews: 93
Location: Busy Being the Queen Of Everything.. And Trying to Catch the Yoda-Copter
Fri Feb 27, 2004 10:11 pm
Awww....for one who has a little boy, that little
ficlet is very touching. If only we could all see
each other through childrens' eyes....
 
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BellemaineChercoeur

Joined: 28 May 2003
Reviews: 106
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Sat Feb 28, 2004 7:21 am
Sweet, and a lot of emotion for a 100 words! Well Done.
 
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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Sat Feb 28, 2004 9:40 am
Very touching and charming; Faramir's confession came unexpectedly so all the better. I wonder if this might not do better if not a drabble. I found it a little stilted; some more words could smooth things out nicely
 
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Genesis

Joined: 13 May 2003
Reviews: 7
Location: Anchorage, Alaska
Mon Mar 01, 2004 5:19 am
That was such a sweet little story. I really like that Faramir thinks his mother more beautiful than Arwen. Kind of wish it was longer - but highly enjoyable nonetheless. Smile smiley face
 
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GypsieRose

Joined: 09 Jul 2003
Reviews: 45
Location: Illinois, USA
Wed Mar 17, 2004 10:43 am
NancyBrooke said
> I found it a little stilted; some more words could smooth things out nicely

I reworked it a little to fix a bit that was bothering me; hopefully it flows better now.
 
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
Thu May 06, 2004 9:57 am
Very sweet and touching! Very unexpected... my only critic? It's to short! Lol. Anyway, it was beautiful. Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face

mona
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Nienna
Joined: 22 May 2004
Reviews: 24
Location: England
Wed Aug 04, 2004 4:18 pm
Aahh... nice one. I agree with my fellow reviewers: too short! Everyone always goes on about Faramir's insecurities, so it's good to see the tables turned here.
 
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