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HollyTook

Joined: 24 Jan 2004
Reviews: 36
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Tue Mar 16, 2004 10:43 pm
hmmm....needs work. I don't want to be mean, so that's all I'll say.

~*Holly Took*~
 
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Eyborg
Joined: 08 May 2004
Reviews: 101
Location: Reykjavík, Iceland
Sun Aug 22, 2004 3:56 pm
Very sweet! Smile smiley face I would take a look at the second line though; it looks as if it's unfinished. But otherwise, good! Smile smiley face
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Fri Nov 03, 2006 6:34 am
This does seem to need something. Dropping articles makes the thoughts incomplete, and awkward to read. The sentiments are quite nice; it is the delivery.
 
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