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MaryA
Joined: 15 Apr 2004
Reviews: 8
Location: Michigan
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Fri Apr 23, 2004 12:07 am
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I love your version of Thranduil. All dressed in black. He is just ornery enough to be delightful.  |
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linweseregon
Joined: 16 Nov 2003
Reviews: 43
Location: North of the River and south of the Sun
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Thu Jul 29, 2004 7:32 am
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I've not been reading this for a while, then I read the last chapter.
So sad, all that wasted time.
Love is much to precious to wait, if you find out grasp with both hands and hold on really tight.
Well done. |
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MaryA
Joined: 15 Apr 2004
Reviews: 8
Location: Michigan
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Fri Jan 14, 2005 7:07 pm
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Your Erestor is one of my favorites! Just in case I forgot to tell you!
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ozzyswench
Joined: 13 Jan 2005
Reviews: 1
Location: somewhere
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Fri Jan 14, 2005 8:04 pm
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What a wonderful story!
I have always loved King Thranduil and it is so nice reading a non slashy story with him in it.
You write him well, very well!
Hope to read more of your writing soon!
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Avaril
Joined: 08 Dec 2004
Reviews: 19
Location: Confusion
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Sat Jan 15, 2005 12:14 am
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Oh my Eru! I adore this! This is a beautiful story, and hte best version of Erestor I have read yet!!!
Okay, and I love the other elves too...
But seriously, a million thumbs up...
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RunnerBeast
Joined: 01 May 2004
Reviews: 19
Location: WA
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Sun Jan 16, 2005 12:50 am
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I thought this was really good. I really liked your OC, Eadhild. Considering the hurt she suffered by the rejection by her husband and her desire for freedom, I can understand her reactions to her intimate encounters with the elves. Also later on she connected with many of them, actually all the ones you name here in your story.
My favorite elves that Eadhild encountered are Orophin, he just seems to start her out right. Also, Erestor just because I never thought much about him and I LOVE how you wrote him. I like how she connected with Haldir, but I didn't really feel that spark... dang, I wish she would have been there when he came back that one time for her. I like Thranduil, too, mainly because he provided the stability, financial support and totally appreciation of HER for that time in her life. I loved that Rumil helped her so dearly through that difficult time, and it was very sad when she realized she was never going to see him again. That was very cool to have that part in your story.
This was lots of fun, and there was lots of adventure. Eadhild was able to travel all of Middle-Earth thanks to the elves whether they came to her or they brought her to them. And all the lovemaking was very, very hot. Very well written for sure! I'm glad your story was brought to my attention.
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EnchantessM
Joined: 30 Sep 2011
Reviews: 9
Location: USA
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Sun Nov 27, 2011 3:07 pm
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~very deep sigh~
You have me all choked up here.
Well written story, Mal. Thank you for posting. |
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Hanasian
Joined: 06 Sep 2010
Reviews: 24
Location: Somewhere in Eriador
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Sat Oct 14, 2017 9:38 am
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| The barmaid Eadhild of Rohan starts right off being a slutty elf-cum receptacle. Getting that out of the way early on, her deeper story comes out while continuing to be a slut. Reasonably well written. I didn't recall getting much of a description of Eadhild other than the clothing she wore early on. I may have missed it. Thanks for sharing! |
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