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Krystallin
Joined: 26 Nov 2003
Reviews: 3
Location: Australia
Thu Mar 04, 2004 5:44 am
Well you know how much I love these tales sis. And well... you are now also writing Ara baby! Though he is only a child. Gah, but what a man he grows into! *sigh.* Lol but I digress. Reading your Glorfy fics helps me in writing your birthday fic.

Wonderful as always sis. Can't wait for the next installment. xx Krys
 
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Thu Mar 04, 2004 5:43 pm
I love your reason for Glorfindel's return: that he couldn't bear an eternity of watching Idril and Tuor in their bliss. *romantic sigh* And that action scene, though short, was nicely done. This sentence was lovely: "The deadly dance he wove kept him ducking and weaving through the throng, until the world fell away and all that existed was himself, his weapon and his enemy." Sounds very eastern (aikido-esque, even). Smile smiley face And I won't spoil it for folks who haven't read, but the identity of the woman he saves in the forest... YES. (AS an aside: It looks like a personal note survived your edit: "As he looked into fearless gun metal (they don#t have guns) grey eyes"). This story is fantastic so far. Yay, you're writing lotrfic!! (sorry, should contain my glee. lol)
 
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Devaeriel
Joined: 27 Jan 2004
Reviews: 10
Location: Australia
Fri Mar 05, 2004 9:54 am
heheh I think in terms of Eastern Fighting when I see battle scenes. I did Karate for 12 years and learned Katana. The elvish way of fighting in the movies, particularly Legolas's was very like what I learned

Heheh I'm glad you are enjoying the LOTR Fic's. I have a few more Glorfy ones planned too
 
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sindohte

Joined: 14 May 2003
Reviews: 157
Location: Rubbing up against an Elf
Tue Jun 01, 2004 11:07 pm
Simply superb. Glorfindel is definitely one of my favorite characters. Such a tragic story of sacrifice and enduring through the ages. I am glad to know that you have a few more Glorfindel stories planned Very Happy smiley face
 
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HisieLome
Joined: 17 Jan 2004
Reviews: 133
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Thu Jun 17, 2004 10:06 pm
I loved the fighting scene.... it felt as if Glorfindel was in the midst of a kata and the "dance" was no longer thought about....it just was.

Great word usage and grammar.

This is a great beginning...
 
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