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HollyTook

Joined: 24 Jan 2004
Reviews: 36
Location: 
Wed Mar 17, 2004 1:12 pm
You've got the sing-songy feel down fine, but your verbs are often in disagreement. Most of the time you mean to say 'where has ____ gone?' Also, one's self = oneself. You had some nice imagery, like 'corruption coils.' Correct your verbs, and it'll be decent!

~*Holly Took*~
 
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SamwiseTheStrong
Joined: 27 Feb 2004
Reviews: 52
Location: Oregon, USA
Wed May 19, 2004 2:56 am
Lovey, luv. Very complicated, and yet not at the same time. Thhat's like the same thing, only different. Luvs ya much.
Luv,
Ur Samwise
 
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
Tue Jul 13, 2004 1:30 pm
Lovely! Amazing! I've read it many times but forgot to review. Woven with emotions, an inspirational piece.... Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face
 
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Sulriel

Joined: 07 Jan 2004
Reviews: 327
Location: Imladris (or maybe Texas ...)
Sat Nov 19, 2005 8:30 am
This is reminiscent of folk songs such as 'where have all the flowers gone'. I enjoy the haunting melancholy tone and the bittersweet thoughts of wondrous ages past.
 
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