Reviews for "Breath of Life"

Sun Mar 07, 2004 5:12 am

Wow, that was quite intense... The 'skin to skin' idea served nicely as a purspose to get the three together Very Happy smiley face

I mean, it's means of survival, after all Very Happy smiley face

I know my room seemed hotter after reading this Razz smiley face

Sun Mar 07, 2004 6:15 am

Very intresting... Very Happy smiley face

Sun Mar 07, 2004 7:39 am

Very nice. I am quite pleased to see such a pairing. It is quite plausible in an alternate universe sort of way that Eowyn, Faramir & Boromir could have all met at some point prior to the War of the Ring. Although your story was a PWP, you still came up with a scenario that was reasonable enough to explain the ensuing smut. Wink smiley face

Sun Mar 07, 2004 2:59 pm

Oh I like this ... I like this a lot! Well done. I liked your motif of opposites constantly in balance - fear and desire, pain and pleasure, etc. - and think you used it most effectively. A most well-written PWP and therefore all the more enjoyable.

So glad to have another Boromir slut-sister on board! Tee hee!

Sun Mar 07, 2004 11:22 pm

This was excellent, i agree with sindohte, even though its a PWP it is really well done and quite beliveable. I love that!

Of course i now require a cold shower, cant wait to read more. Very Happy smiley face

Mon Mar 08, 2004 4:09 pm

I liked this very much. Smut without being pure smut (like the stuff I do - lol), but well written and well thought out story and reasoning. Really enjoyable.

And yes, like Nancy - nice to see another Boromir obsessive on the board!! *gets dreamy far away look in her eyes* Oh, for a Boromir all of my very own...

Wed Mar 10, 2004 1:00 pm

I enjoyed this very much. A lovely scenario. You thought out the plot well. There were just a couple of problems with your tenses - shall write to you over the message function.

Wed Mar 10, 2004 2:06 pm

What impressed me the most about this PWP was that even though we were treated to a very high dosage of well-written smut, you were able to make it believable and to give the characters such well-defined personalities (and I found their personalities at least to be in accordance to canon ... not their actions, but their character). The difference between Boromir the warrior, and Faramir the poet was very well portrayed from the beginning. From their reactions to the situation (straight-forward Boromir as opposed to shy Faramir), to even their preferences in the matters of lovemaking, all helped illustrate their personalities so well. What's most amazing is that you managed to do all this in only one chapter!

And then there's Eowyn. So dual ... and so trapped between what the social norm dictates and what she desires. Just as she is trapped between both brothers Very Happy smiley face

. I was glad she chose her own desire ... and I'm glad that Faramir chose her ... yes, maybe some would call it sappy ... but I'm a sucker for happy endings!

Great job!

Tue Mar 16, 2004 4:08 am

Oh my...

Both of them!? YES! Couldn´t she had married both? Well, of course not, but the images this brings to my depraved mind... hrmm.. I should probably stop now. Need to take a shower (a cold one!) anyway. Razz smiley face

Anyhoo, well written, HOT smut (always welcome), happy ending and an interesting AU-plot (what plot?)! Very Happy smiley face

Mon Mar 22, 2004 7:40 pm

Well, now. That was some Grade A smut. Smile smiley face

Talk about brotherly love. Delish. Thanks for writing this and for letting me peek.

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