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Ethauriel
Joined: 15 Feb 2004
Reviews: 11
Location: Singapore
Tue Mar 23, 2004 10:43 am

I totally agree with Thuriniel's views! Granted that the smut IS excellent, but what really riveted me (and left an impression) was the portrayal of the brothers, Boromir and Faramir! I am not particularly interested in threesomes but I like your interpretation of their personalities.

Your fanfic definitely opened for me a new perspective of these 2 characters, thank you!

Looking forward to your future stories Smile smiley face
 
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Vulgarweed
Joined: 13 Feb 2004
Reviews: 8
Location: The Sickly Crescent (Best Tavern in the Morgul Vale)
Fri Apr 16, 2004 2:20 am

Very nice! It's not easy to work something like this into such dourly realistic cultural mores plausibly. I'd say the setup is awfully cliched, but of course you know that! We'll call it something nicer, like tried-and-true; you certainly used it well. I'm very very fond of threesomes; there should be more. Lucky Eowyn.
 
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Ninde
Joined: 25 Mar 2004
Reviews: 25
Location: Headed for Middle Earth
Tue Apr 27, 2004 11:32 pm

I agree with Vulgarweed..Eowyn was VERY lucky...To have had not just one, but both of the brothers, and at the same time...whew...gotta get a shower...then come back and re-read this story...Boromir is such a hottie...Faramir is to, but there is something about Boromir that just,... well,... you know what I mean don't you... Smokin' smiley face
 
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Greymist
Joined: 24 May 2004
Reviews: 3
Location: Western US
Mon May 24, 2004 1:21 am

A well written smut is a work of art... and this was. To the point that I had to register JUST to submit a review. The sex was good... otherwise it could hardly be a well-written smut could it - but moreover they all stayed in character, something most folks seem to let slip in the heat of the moment.

LOVELY piece of work and I just can't hate a lass with your handle....

Greymist
 
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Anyathe

Joined: 21 Feb 2004
Reviews: 7
Location: Australia
Sun Mar 06, 2005 11:47 pm

I'm serious. This story gave me the shakes. I should NOT have read this at work. I don't think I've ever read fanfic that turned me on as much as this one did. In face I KNOW I haven't read such a story before! I am flushed, I have the shakes, I am trying to hide all this from my co-workers.

AMAZING work. Thank you so much for sharing...this took my breath away. I will be recommending this story to everyone I know!
 
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Belle
Joined: 14 Mar 2005
Reviews: 14
Location: NL
Mon Mar 14, 2005 2:36 am

I'm normally not a E/F fan but in this case it's brilliant.
mmmmm love 3-some.
As said before me, Éowyn is very lucky lady.

ThanXs

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Rozzan

Joined: 08 Aug 2005
Reviews: 17
Location: A shire in England, lying in leaves with Legolas
Wed Aug 10, 2005 6:01 am

Wow! This was excellent. Quite a stunning PWP. Agree with what others have said about the believability of the scenario and the true characteristaions of the three. So well done. You do indeed pack a great deal of depth into a short story. Stories that are perfect lengths. Nothing superfluous, but so much included. The sex was hot. Really, really good. Phew! What an arousing idea to be between these two brothers. You have really set me uo for the day now. i will think of little else... (though my personal preference would be for Elladan and Elrohir \%/ gasp) Also I loved the redeeming touch of love and romance. That made it beautiful and meaningful and gave a sense of the future making this far more than a simple PWP. Ahem, well what I mean to say is... you are a truly excellent writer!
 
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Halfwest

Joined: 21 Aug 2003
Reviews: 8
Location: Ladros
Mon Feb 13, 2006 4:53 am

*points to previous reviewers*

What they said. With a side order of GUH.

you win.
 
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Pixie468

Joined: 05 Nov 2007
Reviews: 2
Location: Florida, USA
Mon Nov 07, 2011 2:49 am

Wow! You have a way with words. Great smutty story. Smile smiley face
 
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