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Elentari
Joined: 13 May 2003
Reviews: 244
Location: Lost in elven dreams...
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Sat Mar 13, 2004 2:00 pm
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Dearest!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I am overjoyed to review this piece. And we've been waiting for it, haven't we, since you delivered that delicious morsel and left us hanging around, our hearts in our hands....
I am speechless and absolutely thrilled. The prologue was very fine- full of emotion and suspense. Bless you! I am looking forward to see what twisted ideas you have for us. |
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Viv
Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
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Sat Mar 13, 2004 7:47 pm
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| Cindar's hot. |
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Viv
Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
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Sat Mar 13, 2004 7:49 pm
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hee. Okay, now for a *real* review. I remain of the opinion that Cindar is a lovely character so far. So wise, for one so young. I want to braid his hair all afternoon and listen to him chatter. In the mean time, I'll settle for some more of this story, if you please.  |
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Thuriniel
Joined: 29 Jul 2003
Reviews: 94
Location: Watching the purple sky fly over me ...
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Wed Mar 17, 2004 10:49 am
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It's finally here  ! This is a superb beginning for what I'm sure it's going to be a fabulous fic!
I agree with Viv, Círdan is hot ... he has much of his daddy in him. He is thoughtful, wise, centered ... and he perfectly balances Kyme's more fiery personality. Right now I find Kyme to be even tougher than her mother, but then she's under very tragic circumstances, and we only have the prologue to chew on, so I'm sure we're going to learn a lot about her and what makes her tick (although, I must add, indulge us on Círdan as well, please!).
I cannnot end the review without mentioning my very most favorite part of the dialogue:
“Do you by any chance think, Kyme daughter of Cyrene, that you are the only one entitled to grieve your mother? Are Father or I not worthy of feeling the loss and pain because in your haughty eyes we are ignoble males?”
... after reading that, I just knew that Círdan is going to be my fave character of this fic ... he has the talent of reading his sister quite well and not being shy about saying what's in his mind  .
Keep writing C.! |
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miriel361
Joined: 11 Jun 2003
Reviews: 103
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Wed Mar 17, 2004 2:55 pm
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| At last - a new story for me to chew over when I am running. |
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Taethowen
Joined: 13 Nov 2003
Reviews: 5
Location: Oklahoma, USA
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Sun Mar 21, 2004 5:28 pm
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yay!! I'm glad to see you finally decided to write the sequel! (I don't know if you remember me, we talked on AIM for a while, and then I vanished [lost internet priviledges for about a month - don't ask, long story - and I still don't have access to my IM stuff). But if you have any more questions about Rohan, feel free to email me or pm me, and I can't wait for the next part of the story!
Rebekah |
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Mija
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 16
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Wed Mar 24, 2004 2:40 am
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WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME YOU WERE DOING A SEQUEL??!!! I'm a little hurt actually.   But I forgive you because I love you. What a wonderful story, I can't wait to see more.....Please tell me that you are going to continue this. HUGS |
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StArSpLaSh
Joined: 18 Jan 2004
Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
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Sat Mar 27, 2004 11:13 pm
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| YEA! I'm soo happy you are writing a sequel! I can't wait for you to update. It's a great beginning! |
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Jomitsui
Joined: 24 Dec 2003
Reviews: 29
Location: Singapore
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Thu Apr 01, 2004 11:22 am
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Wow!! More!! Good!! 
Love ur OCs, can't wait for more!! |
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Maram68
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 114
Location: West from East
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Thu Apr 01, 2004 5:02 pm
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Thank you all for your reviews. In fact, the muse seems to be quite impressed.
I can only tell that we are working on the fic, and that it involves more of Adversity, Elves, Rohirrim, Amazons and ... whatever my mushy barin can concoct later.
Thanks!
C. |
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