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JennnLee

Joined: 03 Nov 2003 Reviews: 28
Location: Orlando, FL
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Fri Mar 12, 2004 6:32 pm
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Hee! Okay, that was cute. Very cute.  |
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Kalythianna

Joined: 05 Jan 2004 Reviews: 11
Location: Canada
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Sat Mar 13, 2004 10:14 pm
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Very very good, had me laughing the whole way through.
Having someone beta it would help with some of the spelling mistakes you missed.
Keep up the great work. |
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Devaeriel
Joined: 27 Jan 2004 Reviews: 10
Location: Australia
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Sun Mar 14, 2004 3:25 am
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I really liked it.
Again yes there were some spelling errors that would benefit from a beta. But I was laughing all the way through it.
It was a great idea and a nice take off of all those “Girl from our century gets dropped into the fellowship” stories |
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Anorliriel
Joined: 11 Dec 2003 Reviews: 16
Location: Southern California
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Sun Mar 14, 2004 12:11 pm
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I thought it was great.... and it makes me think that I would have to think alot more before I accepted such an offer... although Elf's are not the ones that wouldbe the draw for me to go to Middle Earth. Very interesting idea though..... hmmm Why isn't my phone ringing?.........  |
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BellemaineChercoeur

Joined: 28 May 2003 Reviews: 106
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Mon Mar 15, 2004 5:26 am
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| Very cute! Well Done! |
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003 Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
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Mon Mar 15, 2004 6:56 am
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| Hahaha... damn funny! |
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HisieLome
Joined: 17 Jan 2004 Reviews: 133
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Sun Apr 25, 2004 3:22 pm
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| Yes, they should give those poor mary sues some lessons....damn funny |
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Eyborg
Joined: 08 May 2004 Reviews: 101
Location: Reykjavík, Iceland
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Thu Mar 31, 2005 12:19 pm
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LOL! That was just so funny... gotta love those Mary Sue parodies. And yours was very, very good! Thanks!  |
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TrissMarigold

Joined: 12 Mar 2004 Reviews: 27
Location: the land of dreams
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Sat Apr 09, 2005 9:31 am
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Thank you all for the reviews As it's my first story it really means a lot to receive such nice reviews. |
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
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Thu Mar 23, 2006 9:42 am
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| You know, if you read an MS, at least reading an obvious one is preferable. Very funny, and very well done. But, the poor MS was kind of cheated out of her fair due, duncha think? Poor Laura. LOL |
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