Reviews for "He of the Ring"

Sun Mar 14, 2004 1:23 pm

I think you did fine. I hope you will write more. You write ..... I'll read. Fair deal?

Wed Mar 17, 2004 12:50 pm

A very ambitious rhyme scheme, I'll give you that! You had some problems with fitting meaningful words into it, though, and in an attempt to stick to the scheme, you came up with some rather silly, off topic phrases: 'throb it,' 'breed him,' 'Fates it! Crates it!' heeheehee Laughing smiley face

. I will give you the same advice I gave to another poet: instead of trying to retell the well-known story using rhyme, you might want to write about the plot we don't know, or delve into character poems.

~*Holly Took*~

Wed Mar 17, 2004 9:29 pm

I agree. It is very well-written.

Wed Mar 24, 2004 8:35 am

I agree with everyone. I would like to read some more of your poems. (if you have more)

Mon Apr 05, 2004 10:03 am

Very nice. Some...uh, rather unusual rhymes put in there to make the pattern fit but overall an excellent piece. Well done!

Tue Jun 29, 2004 10:28 pm

WoW! That was Amazing! I never actually read a whole poem unless i really like it....so i guess you can say i really liked it eh? Laughing smiley face

Tue Jun 29, 2004 10:41 pm

Interesting scheme. While I agree with HollyTook concerning some of the actual rhymes, over all I liked the oddness of the pattern. (Go fig, I do not like regular poetry. Too boring) I am not a big fan of poetry, although I have several, so if I can finish one, it must be fairly good. Yours is above fairly. Thank you.

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