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Maram68

Joined: 12 May 2003 Reviews: 114
Location: West from East
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Tue Jun 10, 2003 8:36 pm
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| I said it before. A great, lovely and deeply endearing smut gem. Awesome work, Dear! |
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JennnLee

Joined: 03 Nov 2003 Reviews: 28
Location: Orlando, FL
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| Really, truly delicious. I've read a lot of smut, and written a few myself, but there were some beautiful turns of phrase in here that took my breath away. Wonderful job! |
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Scribe

Joined: 15 Sep 2003 Reviews: 40
Location: Betelgeuse
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Tue Jun 10, 2003 9:55 pm
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| What she said and more. Beautifully written, just the kind of smut this archive was made for. |
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sheraiah

Joined: 16 May 2003 Reviews: 27
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Tue Jun 10, 2003 10:03 pm
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| Just going to echo the statements above. More please! |
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Ariel

Joined: 25 Apr 2003 Reviews: 48
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Thu Jun 12, 2003 9:01 am
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| Very delicious smut! Ah yes, I am not usually into Aragorn, but you have created a delightful and credible little romp that is most definitely tingly even for a hobbit lover. I echo the sentiments... more, more! |
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Nanneline
Joined: 26 May 2003 Reviews: 1
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Thu Jun 12, 2003 1:48 pm
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Very very delicious smut! (I must agree with the others for I feel the same) It was beautifully written, and deeply inspiring. Well done! I hope to see more!
*muah* |
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003 Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
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Thu Jun 12, 2003 2:19 pm
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| I just want to thank you kind folks for leaving reviews... I started to reply to each one individually then realized that the system was posting all of my replies as individual reviews. Eek. But really, it is wonderful to receive feedback, and especially from such talented and neato folks. Makes me want to run home right now and scribble madly. Thank-you chocolates all around! |
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miriel361
Joined: 11 Jun 2003 Reviews: 103
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Sat Jun 14, 2003 11:29 am
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| Hi Viv. Well it's hot - very hot indeed. But of course - your smut always is. May we have some more please? |
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alon
Joined: 28 May 2003 Reviews: 2
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Wed Jun 18, 2003 7:07 pm
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Good heavens!!! I loved this. It's completely plausible and deliciously well-written. I would love to read some more of your work.
peace...adrienne |
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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003 Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
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Wed Jun 18, 2003 8:23 pm
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| You take a basically standard scenario and make it something quite new and fresh through some excellent turns of phrase: "Eowyn longed to hold it, to hoard it," "tumult of her pulse," "Incursion." I particularly liked how you took Eowyn's strengths and turned them in her frustration into negatives, and turned her limitations into perspective. And then there was the sex ... Yee Hah! Excellent job. |
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