Joined: 14 Jul 2003 Reviews: 251
Location: Breaking in a Brandybuck... *wicked grin*
Fri Mar 19, 2004 1:37 pm
Very nice! You didn't have to sacrifice sense for sound, I like that
HollyTook
Joined: 24 Jan 2004 Reviews: 36
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Sat Mar 20, 2004 9:32 pm
What do you mean? 'sacrifice sense for sound'?
~*Holly Took*~
Rous
Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Mon Nov 08, 2004 4:50 pm
Evocative, but a little uneven, meter-wise. The imagery was good, but I had a little trouble finding a rhythm. However, thank you for sharing, it was a good read.