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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003
Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
Fri Mar 19, 2004 10:46 am
wow... not bad... creative work.
 
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SilverMoonLady

Joined: 14 Jul 2003
Reviews: 251
Location: Breaking in a Brandybuck... *wicked grin*
Fri Mar 19, 2004 1:34 pm
nifty! entirely out of the ordinary. Smile smiley face
 
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HollyTook

Joined: 24 Jan 2004
Reviews: 36
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Sat Mar 20, 2004 9:40 pm
I liked how it sort of grew, the shape of the words themselves. I love the fire and ice imagery. I recommend embellishing the fire-ice/love-hate thing, and ditch blunt lines like 'I hate you! I love you so,' because, toward the end, you repeated yourself a bit.If you do that, this will be fantastic! That's just my opinion.

~*Holly Took*~
 
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
Tue Mar 30, 2004 1:20 pm
Great imagery and descriptions! A very original piece and an exceptionally good insight to how he feels.... plus, it's succint.... and beautiful. Very Happy smiley face
 
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ElflingImp
Joined: 14 Jul 2005
Reviews: 128
Location: Some where in Middle Earth
Thu Aug 10, 2006 7:13 am
Very creative the way you wrote that! Humm I always thought that was how grumpy old Denethor felt, poor Faramir but alas he does get the lady in the end and rises above it all Doesnt he.
 
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