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hobbitlove
Joined: 28 Jun 2003 Reviews: 5
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Fri Jun 11, 2004 11:47 am
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| Absolutely beautiful Miriel! I love your work! I have been a big fan of Elrohir's since reading Captain My Captain. This just adds more depth and beauty to him. I have read all your stories and love them, especially Viggo adventures. I also really like your friend JackieS! |
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ilistine

Joined: 27 Sep 2003 Reviews: 137
Location: In the cottage nextdoor to Imedhuir Hamgeredis
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Tue Jun 15, 2004 4:32 am
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It is 2:30 am and I just read the whole thing. BittenBuggy pointed me to this story tonight or shouldI say last night and Ihave been so enthralled I have not stopped reading it. This story was incredible and I so loved the ending. Oh, how I fell in love with Elrohir, what an amazing specimen of a fine male warrior. The love and passion between those two was awesome! I find myself thirsty for more.
So thank you for such a completely enthralling and captivating story!
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Forest
Joined: 22 Jun 2004 Reviews: 3
Location: UK
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Fri Jul 02, 2004 5:15 am
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Heylo, chuck!
I found your story bloomin' brilliant. The imagery was fantastic, the characterizations were great and in-depth and especially loved the chapter "Judas Kiss" - I was literally screaming at my monitor about Alistair *apparantly* being a complete git. (Excuse my language!)
Oh, and I cried buckets in the last chapter when Elrohir left. Having Elladan meet Siobhan was a very nice touch too, but nonetheless, I think I must have used at least half a box of tissues on this story!
Personally, if I saw this story published as a novel in a shop, I probably would buy it - for me it is THAT enjoyable! I read the entire thing in one sitting, but had to download chapters twelve onwards because I was using up so much internet time!
(Yup. Slow reader alert!)
All in all, a magnificent piece of work and look foward to reading more of your works in the future. I will eventually go and read the sequel to this, but first, I need to remove my backside from this swivel chair (which I have been sitting in for the past two and a half hours) and go and get something to eat. *chuckles*
~Forest, v'surprised said story hasn't gotten tons more reviews! |
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miriel361
Joined: 11 Jun 2003 Reviews: 103
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Fri Jul 02, 2004 3:37 pm
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Thanks Forest and all of you who have reviewed.
There are a lot of lurkers out there who don't review. Hell I don't even know if you read past the first chapter.
In any case, I am always surprised, flattered and honoured when I hear on chat or elsewhere that someone has read this story.
It is now over a year since I have finished and even I have to grimace at the fact that I wrote Elrohir blond. I really did try to find a description but ahem .... failed. And of course I have a weakness for blonds.
Thank you anyway to all of you who take the time to review. I really appreciate it. |
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HeartoftheNight

Joined: 25 Jun 2004 Reviews: 2
Location: Barwench in the Golden Hall
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Mon Jul 05, 2004 8:05 pm
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This was simply beautiful. Its been a long time since I've read such a story. Its beside the fact that Elrohir and Elladan are some of my favorites. But it was ... simply touching, especially the end. Can't wait to read more of your stuff!  |
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Yavanie

Joined: 02 Jun 2004 Reviews: 122
Location: Texas
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Thu Oct 28, 2004 3:00 am
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| Okay, just stumbled on this while looking for a nice elf to read about before bed. Being a twin mywelf, I was sucked in. Now it is 3am and I have a busy day tomorrow but the day dreams will be well worth it. Butterflies will have new meaning to make me smile!!!! |
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raravenenum
Joined: 04 Apr 2005 Reviews: 1
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Sun Apr 03, 2005 11:41 pm
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| I am so geeked to have found this story. I have been looking for it for a very long time. I'd read it while it was in the process of being written however long ago and lost the link. I haven't really stopped thinking about it -- it's a haunting tale. I've been googling it every now and then with no luck at finding it. But YAY!! Finally, I get to read the end... I"m ecstatic that I found. Great story Miriel. Wonderful. Awesome. Incredible. Sorry, I'm getting carried away. But really, you have no idea at how long I've been looking for it. |
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miriel361
Joined: 11 Jun 2003 Reviews: 103
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Mon Apr 11, 2005 1:35 pm
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| wow ... that's moving raravenum. Thank you! You made my day. |
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Terri
Joined: 19 Jun 2003 Reviews: 5
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Mon Aug 29, 2005 3:45 pm
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I just don't know how you do it! Your writing is so impressive! I wish I could pull this off as well as you do! Wonderful!!!
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Maria
Joined: 24 May 2005 Reviews: 161
Location: GREEN BAY,(PACKERS) WIS.
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Sun Sep 21, 2008 7:42 pm
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| Okay I have now read this story seven times already and the sequel (very good story and I have it saved on my fav's) Love, love,love this story immensely. Your writing style is exquisite. Your knowledge in various areas makes this story like it is a true story. But on the second part, no there is not criticism here is the ending. What happened to the Carnal addition you promised. Waaaaaaaa! I want the Carnality ending. Big Fan. |
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