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hobbitlove
Joined: 28 Jun 2003
Reviews: 5
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Fri Jun 11, 2004 11:47 am

Absolutely beautiful Miriel! I love your work! I have been a big fan of Elrohir's since reading Captain My Captain. This just adds more depth and beauty to him. I have read all your stories and love them, especially Viggo adventures. I also really like your friend JackieS!
 
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ilistine

Joined: 27 Sep 2003
Reviews: 137
Location: In the cottage nextdoor to Imedhuir Hamgeredis
Tue Jun 15, 2004 4:32 am

It is 2:30 am and I just read the whole thing. BittenBuggy pointed me to this story tonight or shouldI say last night and Ihave been so enthralled I have not stopped reading it. This story was incredible and I so loved the ending. Oh, how I fell in love with Elrohir, what an amazing specimen of a fine male warrior. The love and passion between those two was awesome! I find myself thirsty for more.

So thank you for such a completely enthralling and captivating story!

Keek (Ilistine)
 
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Forest
Joined: 22 Jun 2004
Reviews: 3
Location: UK
Fri Jul 02, 2004 5:15 am

Heylo, chuck!

I found your story bloomin' brilliant. The imagery was fantastic, the characterizations were great and in-depth and especially loved the chapter "Judas Kiss" - I was literally screaming at my monitor about Alistair *apparantly* being a complete git. (Excuse my language!)

Oh, and I cried buckets in the last chapter when Elrohir left. Having Elladan meet Siobhan was a very nice touch too, but nonetheless, I think I must have used at least half a box of tissues on this story!

Personally, if I saw this story published as a novel in a shop, I probably would buy it - for me it is THAT enjoyable! I read the entire thing in one sitting, but had to download chapters twelve onwards because I was using up so much internet time! Very Happy smiley face
(Yup. Slow reader alert!)

All in all, a magnificent piece of work and look foward to reading more of your works in the future. I will eventually go and read the sequel to this, but first, I need to remove my backside from this swivel chair (which I have been sitting in for the past two and a half hours) and go and get something to eat. *chuckles*


~Forest, v'surprised said story hasn't gotten tons more reviews!
 
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miriel361
Joined: 11 Jun 2003
Reviews: 103
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Fri Jul 02, 2004 3:37 pm

Thanks Forest and all of you who have reviewed.

There are a lot of lurkers out there who don't review. Hell I don't even know if you read past the first chapter.

In any case, I am always surprised, flattered and honoured when I hear on chat or elsewhere that someone has read this story.

It is now over a year since I have finished and even I have to grimace at the fact that I wrote Elrohir blond. I really did try to find a description but ahem .... failed. And of course I have a weakness for blonds.

Thank you anyway to all of you who take the time to review. I really appreciate it.
 
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HeartoftheNight

Joined: 25 Jun 2004
Reviews: 2
Location: Barwench in the Golden Hall
Mon Jul 05, 2004 8:05 pm

This was simply beautiful. Its been a long time since I've read such a story. Its beside the fact that Elrohir and Elladan are some of my favorites. But it was ... simply touching, especially the end. Can't wait to read more of your stuff! Very Happy smiley face
 
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Yavanie

Joined: 02 Jun 2004
Reviews: 122
Location: Texas
Thu Oct 28, 2004 3:00 am

Okay, just stumbled on this while looking for a nice elf to read about before bed. Being a twin mywelf, I was sucked in. Now it is 3am and I have a busy day tomorrow but the day dreams will be well worth it. Butterflies will have new meaning to make me smile!!!!
 
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raravenenum
Joined: 04 Apr 2005
Reviews: 1
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Sun Apr 03, 2005 11:41 pm

I am so geeked to have found this story. I have been looking for it for a very long time. I'd read it while it was in the process of being written however long ago and lost the link. I haven't really stopped thinking about it -- it's a haunting tale. I've been googling it every now and then with no luck at finding it. But YAY!! Finally, I get to read the end... I"m ecstatic that I found. Great story Miriel. Wonderful. Awesome. Incredible. Sorry, I'm getting carried away. But really, you have no idea at how long I've been looking for it.
 
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miriel361
Joined: 11 Jun 2003
Reviews: 103
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Mon Apr 11, 2005 1:35 pm

wow ... that's moving raravenum. Thank you! You made my day.
 
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Terri
Joined: 19 Jun 2003
Reviews: 5
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Mon Aug 29, 2005 3:45 pm

I just don't know how you do it! Your writing is so impressive! I wish I could pull this off as well as you do! Wonderful!!!
Terri
 
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Maria
Joined: 24 May 2005
Reviews: 161
Location: GREEN BAY,(PACKERS) WIS.
Sun Sep 21, 2008 7:42 pm

Okay I have now read this story seven times already and the sequel (very good story and I have it saved on my fav's) Love, love,love this story immensely. Your writing style is exquisite. Your knowledge in various areas makes this story like it is a true story. But on the second part, no there is not criticism here is the ending. What happened to the Carnal addition you promised. Waaaaaaaa! I want the Carnality ending. Big Fan.
 
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