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amybethm
Joined: 28 Feb 2004 Reviews: 34
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Wed Mar 24, 2004 3:12 pm
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I'm intrigued by this story, which fleshes out basically a footnote in Tolkien's work: how Pippin met Diamond and what he did with himself between the events on _Return of the King_ and, well, the end of the Appendices (don't want to spoil anything for people who haven't read all of _King_. This is a great mix of adventure, suspense, mystery, romance and a dash of humor! I like seeing mature, canny Pippin. The perceptive look at the complicated social structure and society of the Hobbits is fascinating. I love the many textures and layers of this story so far! Please don't take too long to update- I want to know what's happening to these families in the north!
Cheers,
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Lelin
Joined: 31 Mar 2004 Reviews: 29
Location: Jerusalem, Israel
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Wed Mar 31, 2004 3:16 pm
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I really like this story so far! Nice writing. I've always wanted more shire reading. And the tone is right. Please keep going!
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Lelin
Joined: 31 Mar 2004 Reviews: 29
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Mon Apr 26, 2004 3:38 pm
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I'm glad you finally updated. More, please!
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Lelin
Joined: 31 Mar 2004 Reviews: 29
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Mon Jun 07, 2004 10:42 am
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Yay! Thanks for updating. Danger, indeed! Especially to a stubborn hobbit lass' heart.
Love it.
More???
Lelin |
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Eyborg
Joined: 08 May 2004 Reviews: 101
Location: Reykjavík, Iceland
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Mon Jun 07, 2004 10:45 am
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Aha, the Taming of the Shrew! Tee hee... well, let's see if "Petruchio" Pippin manages to tame "Katherina" Diamond! 
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Lelin
Joined: 31 Mar 2004 Reviews: 29
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Sat Jun 19, 2004 1:28 pm
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Ooo.... wha' happen to our Pip? Nicely written, and I can't wait for the next update! Merry to the rescue, or Diamond?
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greywonderer

Joined: 14 Jun 2004 Reviews: 16
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Wed Jul 28, 2004 1:41 am
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| This was wonderful! Loved Merry's face off with Diamond and Pippin's inability to hold still while trapped by the vines. I am wondering about this person called River. Very interesting and I can't wait for more. |
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Lelin
Joined: 31 Mar 2004 Reviews: 29
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Wed Jul 28, 2004 2:54 am
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Thank you for the new chapter - very enjoyable. And the plot keeps thickening!
"Old Man Willow has a stupider brother" - love it! More, please!
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greywonderer

Joined: 14 Jun 2004 Reviews: 16
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Sun Aug 15, 2004 9:05 pm
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I was so glad to see another chapter of this up. This is a great story and I am enjoying it very much. I am glad that Pippin managed to hold onto the wizard's staff. I was also glad to see that Merry was managing to save the children from the fire. Now, I am looking forward to what will happen between Diamond and Pippin. Great story!
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Lelin
Joined: 31 Mar 2004 Reviews: 29
Location: Jerusalem, Israel
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Thu Aug 19, 2004 12:36 pm
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Yay! Another chapter!
I wasn't sure when the fire happened, but it was a good thing. And I liked the description of Pippin's struggle with the Wizard's will.
Looking forward to the next installment!
Lelin |
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