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amybethm
Joined: 28 Feb 2004
Reviews: 34
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Wed Mar 24, 2004 3:12 pm

I'm intrigued by this story, which fleshes out basically a footnote in Tolkien's work: how Pippin met Diamond and what he did with himself between the events on _Return of the King_ and, well, the end of the Appendices (don't want to spoil anything for people who haven't read all of _King_. This is a great mix of adventure, suspense, mystery, romance and a dash of humor! I like seeing mature, canny Pippin. The perceptive look at the complicated social structure and society of the Hobbits is fascinating. I love the many textures and layers of this story so far! Please don't take too long to update- I want to know what's happening to these families in the north!

Cheers,
Amy B.
 
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Lelin
Joined: 31 Mar 2004
Reviews: 29
Location: Jerusalem, Israel
Wed Mar 31, 2004 3:16 pm

I really like this story so far! Nice writing. I've always wanted more shire reading. And the tone is right. Please keep going!

Lelin
 
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Lelin
Joined: 31 Mar 2004
Reviews: 29
Location: Jerusalem, Israel
Mon Apr 26, 2004 3:38 pm

I'm glad you finally updated. More, please! Smile smiley face

Lelin
 
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Lelin
Joined: 31 Mar 2004
Reviews: 29
Location: Jerusalem, Israel
Mon Jun 07, 2004 10:42 am

Yay! Thanks for updating. Danger, indeed! Especially to a stubborn hobbit lass' heart.
Love it.

More???


Lelin
 
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Eyborg
Joined: 08 May 2004
Reviews: 101
Location: Reykjavík, Iceland
Mon Jun 07, 2004 10:45 am

Aha, the Taming of the Shrew! Very Happy smiley face Tee hee... well, let's see if "Petruchio" Pippin manages to tame "Katherina" Diamond! Twisted Evil smiley face
Fine story btw! Smile smiley face
 
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Lelin
Joined: 31 Mar 2004
Reviews: 29
Location: Jerusalem, Israel
Sat Jun 19, 2004 1:28 pm

Ooo.... wha' happen to our Pip? Nicely written, and I can't wait for the next update! Merry to the rescue, or Diamond?

Lelin
 
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greywonderer

Joined: 14 Jun 2004
Reviews: 16
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Wed Jul 28, 2004 1:41 am

This was wonderful! Loved Merry's face off with Diamond and Pippin's inability to hold still while trapped by the vines. I am wondering about this person called River. Very interesting and I can't wait for more.
 
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Lelin
Joined: 31 Mar 2004
Reviews: 29
Location: Jerusalem, Israel
Wed Jul 28, 2004 2:54 am

Thank you for the new chapter - very enjoyable. And the plot keeps thickening!
"Old Man Willow has a stupider brother" - love it! More, please!

Lelin
 
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greywonderer

Joined: 14 Jun 2004
Reviews: 16
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Sun Aug 15, 2004 9:05 pm

I was so glad to see another chapter of this up. This is a great story and I am enjoying it very much. I am glad that Pippin managed to hold onto the wizard's staff. I was also glad to see that Merry was managing to save the children from the fire. Now, I am looking forward to what will happen between Diamond and Pippin. Great story!

Grey_wonderer
 
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Lelin
Joined: 31 Mar 2004
Reviews: 29
Location: Jerusalem, Israel
Thu Aug 19, 2004 12:36 pm

Yay! Another chapter!

I wasn't sure when the fire happened, but it was a good thing. And I liked the description of Pippin's struggle with the Wizard's will.

Looking forward to the next installment!

Lelin
 
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