Reviews for "A Diamond In The Storm"

Fri Sep 17, 2004 1:38 am

Lovely begining Smile smiley face

Had me wondering and curious of who the strangers were. They are cousins... Seems his name is known to him, perhaps his adventures as well... Good story.... Very Happy smiley face

Fri Sep 17, 2004 3:24 am

Excellent! Wink smiley face

Keep this going,was on the edge of my seat... It is a very exciting action story.
I like how pippin and the wizard fought,and how pippin with a spark of himself fought back Exclamation smiley face

Loved,it please update this soon.... I am glad I was recomended to read this story...

Keep on writing and great work Very Happy smiley face

Fri Oct 22, 2004 1:48 am

Wonderful! I loved Pippin's resolve against the wizard and the fact that the tree roots claimed the wizard while Pippin won the staff. Now, I wonder what damage the encounter has caused to Pippin's mind if any. I also hope that Merry and Diamond were able to save the hobbits from the fires. Can't wait for more!

Mon Oct 25, 2004 8:40 am

That reworked chapter works much better than it did before. I am very pleased you decided to tinker with it again - and that there will be more chapters on the way soon!

Fri Oct 29, 2004 1:43 am

Just loved it all and especially this line: ( he shoved the last wisps of remembered terror and hopelessness away, clinging to the rock of his cousin’s presence and the promise of Diamond’s eyes.)

I love how determined Pippin is to win Diamond over and how hard she has been fighting this though she does seem to be giving ground just slightly. I like the way you write her as a strong character in her own right and not just a lass waiting for a proper marriage.
It's a great story and I am still enjoying this very much. As always, I look forward to more.

Grey_wonderer

Fri Oct 29, 2004 1:22 pm

*Sigh*

Finally... You know, this IS a good story... and one I am very willing to rec...

Fri Oct 29, 2004 2:30 pm

Awwwwwwwwwwwww... I loooooove that new chapter! Now I think I'm in love with Pippin... Smile smiley face

Fri Oct 29, 2004 11:50 pm

Wow....nicely done. The wants for one another beats all rules... and pip actually wanted to obey them for the love of Dimond. haha...and of course Dimond took the whole situation on her own hands. NIce.....what a fiery and nice couple they made, can't wait to see what will happen in the morning....hehehe

Sat Oct 30, 2004 2:14 am

This chapter was excellent! Loved how Diamond finally realizes her love for pippin,and will stop at nothing to claim him.

She loves him,but is impatient, her age stands in the way of customs.
You showed this story well,and I can't wait till the next one... Update soon.... Very Happy smiley face

A great story... Smile smiley face

Mon Nov 01, 2004 12:51 pm

Weeeee! They're finally married! Woo hoo!!! Dude smiley face

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