Reviews for "The Daughter of Laurëfin"

Mon Mar 22, 2004 6:29 am

It's really an intresting story. You may want to go back and check up on a few typos though. I can't wait to read more, so keep writing! Very Happy smiley face

Thu Apr 15, 2004 7:02 am

It's lovely....*sniff* and so sad! Crying or Very sad smiley face

Keep writing though, cause it's lovely! Smile smiley face

Thu Jun 24, 2004 8:39 pm

Wow! This is an awesome story. It's soooooo sad. Keep writing and update soon!!!
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Wed Oct 04, 2006 11:01 pm

This is very good so far...you've got me thru two chapters, so that is a good thing! This is well written and interesting. I can't wait to read more!
NIRI

Wed Oct 04, 2006 11:08 pm

Oooh...Another very good chapter! More please? *runs to read*
NiRi

Wed Oct 04, 2006 11:14 pm

Another very good chapter. I do have one complaint though. Tolkien's languages are beautiful indeed, but it is VERY ANNOYING to have it in the text of a story. These are elves speaking, we KNOW they are speaking in elvish. It is much better to have your dialogue in English with the rest of your story. though it is hard for many authors to let it go, myself included. But overall, your story will be much better. Of course, there are always instances where it works, like where the professor included it where the reader doesn't necessarily need to know the meaning...
Still this is a very good story, and I will continue to read!
NiRi

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