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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
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Thu Mar 25, 2004 2:53 pm
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A great job, I think you really captured a moment well, here, and painted a warm scene between the two cousins. Two details I particularly liked were Eomer's nightmarish memory and the singing contest - both in well keeping with what we know if the Rohirrim but showing something new at the same time.
One small typo I spotted, sorry can't say exactly where - you have 'new' instead of 'knew' |
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SamwiseTheStrong
Joined: 27 Feb 2004
Reviews: 52
Location: Oregon, USA
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Sun Mar 28, 2004 2:11 am
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Lovely! I liked it. Too many RPG's are dying these days. It's good to see someone still wants to play. You did very well withh these charaters. Theodred is not one you come across very offten, good for you for using him and being somewhat original. Bye now.
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Novedhelion
Joined: 04 Sep 2003
Reviews: 42
Location: NC
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Mon Apr 26, 2004 7:25 pm
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Very, very nice. I have a sincere soft spot for anything related to my beloved Éorlingas!
One small, teeny tiny thing....Théodred was 13 years older than Éomer, if you are going by book canon. Just FYI....
Please continue writing...I love your knowledge of horses! I wish I had more myself. They are fantastic animals!
 Novedhelion
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Yavanie
Joined: 02 Jun 2004
Reviews: 122
Location: Texas
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Sat Sep 18, 2004 7:39 am
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| I agree with all the above comments. A truly well captured moment. It was easy to picture in my mind. So many fics are full of dark and danger. You hinted at that reality of the day without it overwhelming the mirth and emotions of the moment. Well done. |
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ZeeDrippyVessel
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 95
Location: deep south
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Tue Dec 21, 2004 2:20 am
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I really like this. Like the banter between cousins.
Want to know where the REST of this story is???? |
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krazykataave
Joined: 17 Dec 2004
Reviews: 127
Location: Immortalized by John Denver
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Tue Dec 21, 2004 12:48 pm
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| It was very, very sweet. I can imagine male cousins ribbing each other like that, realistic. |
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Athanya
Joined: 17 Nov 2004
Reviews: 15
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Wed Dec 22, 2004 12:14 am
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wonderful! very well written and believable. it makes me want to be rohirric, and have a horse. it also made me feel really bad for eomer, in your story you really show the relationship between he and his cousin and so that really lets you feel the sense of loss that he himself must have felt after loseing his beloved cousin. very nice, keep writing.
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